A seggestion about Chapter 29.

[Jason]

I've attached a patch that should suffice. 

-j

On Thu, Aug 26, 2010 at 11:40:16PM +0800, Li thus spake:
>Hi all:
>
>FreeBSD Handbook -> Chapter 29 Network Servers ->
>29.2 The inetd “Super-Server” -> 29.2.3 Command-Line Options:
>
>>Novice users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually
>>do not need to be modified, although we mention the rate-limiting
>>options below as they be useful should you find that you are
>>receiving an excessive amount of connections.
>>A full list of options can be found in the inetd(8) manual.
>
>I am not a native English speaker, but I think this sentence is too long.
>
>It may cause some confusion.
>
>So, I suggest some modify it.
>
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@@ -196,12 +196,12 @@
 	single IP address from requesting any service more than 60 times
 	in any given minute.</para>
 
-      <para>Novice users may be pleased to note that
-	these parameters usually do not need to be modified,
-	although we mention the rate-limiting options below as
-	they be useful should you find that you are receiving an
-	excessive amount of connections.  A full list of options
-	can be found in the &man.inetd.8; manual.</para>
+      <para>Although we mention rate-limiting options below, novice
+        users may be pleased to note that these parameters usually
+        do not need to be modified.  These options may be useful 
+	should you find that you are receiving an excessive 
+	amount of connections.  A full list of options can be found 
+	in the &man.inetd.8; manual.</para>
 
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