Erratra report for <a project model for the freebsd project>
Li
fender0107401 at gmail.com
Mon Mar 23 10:17:10 UTC 2009
Hi all:
As a freebsd user and big fan, I always try to do something to improve or help our system.
Recently, I printed this doc: <a project model for the freebsd project> pdf_version, I read it several times , and I found something maybe not correct totally, so I wrote them below, I think someone will correct them.
Note: the page number is according to the pdf version.
Report format: page number | wrong | right
vi | .1 | 1. (this is for notes)
vi | Marleen Devos's email is ? | ?
1 | the communications overhead | the communication's overhead
3 | estimated 5500 contributors on the project, but in figure 3-1 and 3-2 the number is -3000 | ?
4 | 12600 ports.1 | 12600 ports1. (this is for notes)
6 | 4.4BSD.3 | 4.4BSD3. (this is for notes)
7 | updates.5 | updates5. (this is for notes)
10 5.1.2 | should be made | should be made.
10 5.1.4 | This involves involves | This involves
11 | box betten "Core Secretary" and "GNATS Administrator" is blank | ?
13 5.2.6| The resposibilities of the Release Engineering Team are | add ":" in the end, and following sentences need "." too.
21 | The code is than committed and the deployed | The code is than committed and deployed
Others: all figures in this doc is not well, fonts always small, seems well if you see the html version.
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