docs/137243: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2
Glen Barber
glen.j.barber at gmail.com
Wed Jul 29 16:10:08 UTC 2009
>Number: 137243
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] Minor grammatical fixes to Handbook Section 24.2.2
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Wed Jul 29 16:10:04 UTC 2009
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Glen Barber
>Release: 8.0-BETA2
>Organization:
>Environment:
FreeBSD orion 8.0-BETA2 FreeBSD 8.0-BETA2 #11 r195886: Sun Jul 26 05:27:01 EDT 2009 root at orion:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/ORION i386
>Description:
Section 24.2.2 [1] of the handbook contains minor grammatical errors. The handbook states the following:
"This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update will be ran."
This should either be:
a - This entry states that once every day, freebsd-update will run.
or
b - This entry states that once every day, the freebsd-update utility will be run.
[1] - http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/updating-upgrading-freebsdupdate.html
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
The attached patch contains a grammatical fix for the handbook, assuming the first case in the description of this PR
Patch attached with submission follows:
--- cutting-edge/chapter.sgml.orig 2009-07-29 11:46:13.000000000 -0400
+++ cutting-edge/chapter.sgml 2009-07-29 11:50:23.000000000 -0400
@@ -281,8 +281,8 @@
<programlisting>@daily root freebsd-update cron</programlisting>
- <para>This entry states that once every day, the
- <command>freebsd-update</command> will be ran. In this way,
+ <para>This entry states that once every day,
+ <command>freebsd-update</command> will run. In this way,
using the <option>cron</option> argument,
<command>freebsd-update</command> will only check if updates
exist. If patches exist, they will automatically be downloaded
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>Audit-Trail:
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