docs/119463: [handbook] [patch] typo in printing/chapter.sgml
Giorgos Keramidas
keramida at freebsd.org
Tue Jan 15 02:43:30 UTC 2008
On 2008-01-14 18:48, Warren Block <wblock at wonkity.com> wrote:
> On Tue, 15 Jan 2008, Daniel Gerzo wrote:
>> Tuesday, January 15, 2008, 12:02:32 AM, Warren Block wrote:
>>> <para>You should also include the <literal>rw</literal> capability
>>> so <application>LPD</application> opens the printer in read-write
>>> mode.
>>
>> Maybe something like:
>>
>> <para>The <literal>rw</literal> capability should be also included in
>> order to let <application>LPD</application> to open the printer in
>> the read-write mode.</para>
>
> That's a little passive, although I agree with removing "you should".
> Let's make it imperative:
>
> <para>Include the <literal>rw</literal> capability so
> <application>LPD</application> will open the printer in read-write
> mode.
That sounds cool. Can I commit this version? I think we have spent
enough time tinkering with a little sentence already. It would be far
more productive if we wrote even _more_ documentation :)
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