docs/114174: nit in handbook -- install chapter
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Sat Jun 30 23:10:06 UTC 2007
>Number: 114174
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: nit in handbook -- install chapter
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sat Jun 30 23:10:04 GMT 2007
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Benjamin Kaduk
>Release: FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu 7.0-CURRENT FreeBSD 7.0-CURRENT #1: Sun Apr 1 16:59:00 UTC 2007 kaduk at prolepsis.scs.uiuc.edu:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386
>Description:
the phrase ``sum up'' is used as a verb, which, though
common usage may accept, is stylistically inconsistent
with the rest of the text.
>How-To-Repeat:
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/install-hardware.html
>Fix:
--- chapter.sgml.orig Sat Jun 30 17:15:48 2007
+++ chapter.sgml Sat Jun 30 17:23:11 2007
@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
<para>Information about the minimal configuration is
available in the Installation Notes on the <ulink
url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/index.html">Release
- Information</ulink> page of the &os; web site. A sum up of
+ Information</ulink> page of the &os; web site. A summary of
this information is given in the following sections.
Depending on the method you choose to install &os;, you may
also need a floppy drive, a supported CDROM drive, and in some
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
>Unformatted:
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