docs/104381: [PATCH] Handbook security chapter: minor grammatical fixes

[Shaun Amott]

>Number:         104381
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] Handbook security chapter: minor grammatical fixes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
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>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Fri Oct 13 14:10:16 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Shaun Amott
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.2-PRERELEASE i386
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>Environment:

>Description:

The security chapter of the handbook has a few minor grammatical errors.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- security-chapter.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
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RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.299
diff -u -r1.299 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	10 Oct 2006 02:43:40 -0000	1.299
+++ chapter.sgml	12 Oct 2006 14:42:19 -0000
@@ -125,7 +125,7 @@
       servers — meaning that external entities can connect and talk
       to them.  As yesterday's mini-computers and mainframes become
       today's desktops, and as computers become networked and
-      internetwork, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para>
+      inter-networked, security becomes an even bigger issue.</para>
 
     <para>System security also pertains to dealing with various forms of
       attack, including attacks that attempt to crash, or otherwise make a
@@ -2296,6 +2296,9 @@
   Issued           Expires          Principal
 Aug 27 15:37:58  Aug 28 01:37:58  krbtgt/EXAMPLE.ORG at EXAMPLE.ORG</screen>
 
+         <para>The ticket can then be revoked when you have finished:</para>
+
+         <screen>&prompt.user; <userinput>k5destroy</userinput>
       </sect2>
 
       <sect2>
@@ -2319,7 +2322,7 @@
 	  <application>Kerberos</application> enabled daemons and a
 	  workstation — the server must have a
 	  <filename>keytab</filename> file.  This file
-	  contains the servers host key, which allows it and the
+	  contains the server's host key, which allows it and the
 	  <acronym>KDC</acronym> to verify each others identity.  It
 	  must be transmitted to the server in a secure fashion, as the
 	  security of the server can be broken if the key is made public.
@@ -2349,8 +2352,8 @@
 	  you can use <command>kadmin</command> from the
 	  <application>Kerberos</application> server.  The
 	  <command>add --random-key</command> command will let you add the
-	  servers host principal, and the <command>ext</command> command
-	  will allow you to extract the servers host principal to its own
+	  server's host principal, and the <command>ext</command> command
+	  will allow you to extract the server's host principal to its own
 	  keytab.  For example:</para>
 
 	<screen>&prompt.root; <userinput>kadmin</userinput>
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