docs/92842: [PATCH] (handbook/desktop) Give better description of Opera features

[Arjan van Leeuwen]

>Number:         92842
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] (handbook/desktop) Give better description of Opera features
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sun Feb 05 14:20:02 GMT 2006
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Arjan van Leeuwen
>Release:        FreeBSD 6.0-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:


System: FreeBSD 6.0-RELEASE #13: Sun Nov  6 14:50:54 CET 2005
    root at winston.piwebs.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WINSTON



>Description:


This patch better explains the features of Opera (not just a browser)
and removes the bias towards the Mozilla suite in the Desktop chapter
of the handbook.


>How-To-Repeat:





>Fix:


--- desktop-chapter.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- desktop/chapter.sgml	Sun Dec 18 04:02:31 2005
+++ /home/avleeuwen/temp/chapter.sgml	Sun Feb  5 15:15:02 2006
@@ -177,9 +177,8 @@
 	<primary><application>Mozilla</application></primary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para><application>Mozilla</application> is perhaps the most
-        suitable browser for your FreeBSD Desktop.  It is modern,
-        stable, and fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
+      <para><application>Mozilla</application> is a modern,
+        stable browser that is fully ported to FreeBSD.  It features a very
         standards-compliant HTML display engine.  It provides a mail
         and news reader.  It even has a HTML composer if you plan to
         write some web pages yourself.  Users of
@@ -321,10 +320,14 @@
 	<primary><application>Opera</application></primary>
       </indexterm>
 
-      <para><application>Opera</application> is a very fast,
-        full-featured, and standards-compliant browser.  It comes in
-        two favors: a <quote>native</quote> FreeBSD version and a
-	version that runs under Linux emulation.</para>
+      <para><application>Opera</application> is a
+        full-featured and standards-compliant browser.  It also
+        comes with a built-in mail and news reader, an IRC client,
+        an RSS/Atom feeds reader and much more.  Despite this, 
+        <application>Opera</application> is relatively lightweight
+        and very fast. It comes in two favors: a <quote>native</quote> 
+        FreeBSD version and a version that runs under Linux 
+        emulation.</para>
 
       <para>To browse the Web with the FreeBSD version of <application>Opera</application>,
         install the package:</para>
--- desktop-chapter.sgml.diff ends here ---



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