Small diff to ipv6 chapter

Tilman Linneweh arved at arved.at
Thu Jul 14 17:06:37 UTC 2005


Hi,

Here is a small patch for the ipv6 chapter, please approver or commit

regards
tilman
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retrieving revision 1.365
diff -u -r1.365 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	18 Mar 2005 01:56:06 -0000	1.365
+++ chapter.sgml	14 Jul 2005 16:58:51 -0000
@@ -2308,7 +2308,7 @@
 	  <primary>Etherboot</primary>
 	</indexterm>
 
-	<para><ulink url="http://etherboot.sourceforge.net">Etherboot's Web
+	<para><ulink url="http://etherboot.sourceforge.net/">Etherboot's Web
 	  site</ulink> contains
 	  <ulink url="http://etherboot.sourceforge.net/doc/html/userman/t1.html">
 	  extensive documentation</ulink> mainly intended for Linux
@@ -3652,11 +3652,11 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><ulink url="http://www.kame.net">KAME.net</ulink></para>
+	<para><ulink url="http://www.kame.net/">KAME.net</ulink></para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-	<para><ulink url="http://www.6bone.net">6bone.net</ulink></para>
+	<para><ulink url="http://www.6bone.net/">6bone.net</ulink></para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -3840,7 +3840,7 @@
       <para>First take a look at the <ulink url="http://www.6bone.net/">6bone</ulink> site and find a 6bone connection nearest to
 	you.  Write to the responsible person and with a little bit of luck you
 	will be given instructions on how to set up your connection.  Usually this
-	involves setting up a GRE (gif) tunnel.</para>
+	involves setting up an IP tunnel.</para>
 
       <para>Here is a typical example on setting up a &man.gif.4; tunnel:</para>
 
@@ -3877,8 +3877,8 @@
      6  3ffe:1800:0:3:290:27ff:fe14:cdee  394.712 ms  397.19 ms  394.102 ms</screen>
 
       <para>This output will differ from machine to machine.  By now you should be
-	able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net">www.kame.net</ulink>
-	and see the dancing tortoise — that is if you have a IPv6 enabled browser such as
+	able to reach the IPv6 site <ulink url="http://www.kame.net/">www.kame.net</ulink>
+	and see the dancing tortoise — that is if you have an IPv6 enabled browser such as
 	<filename role="package">www/mozilla</filename>, <application>Konqueror</application>,
 	which is part of <filename role="package">x11/kdebase3</filename>,
 	or <filename role="package">www/epiphany</filename>.</para>


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