docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list

[Jesus R. Camou]

The following reply was made to PR docs/77926; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou at cox.net>
To: Marc Fonvieille <blackend at FreeBSD.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77926: [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
Date: Tue, 22 Feb 2005 07:33:44 -0700

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 On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 03:15:41PM +0100, Marc Fonvieille wrote:
 > On Tue, Feb 22, 2005 at 06:53:18AM -0700, Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 > > 
 > > >Number:         77926
 > > >Category:       docs
 > > >Synopsis:       [PATCH] update FDP Primer book word list
 > > >Confidential:   no
 > > >Severity:       non-critical
 > > >Priority:       medium
 > > >Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 > > >State:          open
 > > >Quarter:        
 > > >Keywords:       
 > > >Date-Required:
 > > >Class:          update
 > > >Submitter-Id:   current-users
 > > >Arrival-Date:   Tue Feb 22 14:00:22 GMT 2005
 > > >Closed-Date:
 > > >Last-Modified:
 > > >Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 > > >Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 > > >Organization:
 > > >Environment:
 > > System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou at opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > > 
 > > >Description:
 > > 
 > > 	Update the word list in the FDP Primer with the
 > > 	capitalization of the Ports Collection.
 > > 
 > > >How-To-Repeat:
 > > >Fix:
 > > 
 > > --- writingstyle.diff begins here ---
 > > Index: chapter.sgml
 > > ===================================================================
 > > RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
 > > retrieving revision 1.43
 > > diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
 > > --- chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000	1.43
 > > +++ chapter.sgml	22 Feb 2005 01:29:17 -0000
 > > @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
 > >        </listitem>
 > >  
 > >        <listitem>
 > > -	<para>ports collection</para>
 > > +	<para>Ports Pollection</para>
 > >        </listitem>
 > >
 > 
 > This seems to be redundant with the "FreeBSD Ports Collection" entry,
 > ealier in the document.  And I wonder about the revision 1.16 of this
 > list where both "FreeBSD Ports Collection" and ""ports collection" have
 > been added, maybe Murray and/or Chern may say something on that.
 > This is another example of docproj history, I mean, as with CDROM which
 > came from Walnut Creeks CDROM boxes (have a look to freebsdmall CD sets
 > too), this is not a typo but a choice.
 
 I requested this change to have an order of how words should be spelled.
 Both ways are used throughout the doc/ tree, it would look better if
 there were only one way of writing it from now on.  Some replacements has
 been made lately for the capitalization way.  Plus, oh my, there's a
 typo on my patch.  I'll attach a corrected patch just in case it is 
 decided to be committed.  
 
 -- 
 Jesus R. Camou <jcamou at COX.net>
 jcamou at es.FreeBSD.org
 
 
 
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 Index: writing-style/chapter.sgml
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/chapter.sgml,v
 retrieving revision 1.43
 diff -u -r1.43 chapter.sgml
 --- writing-style/chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 16:57:00 -0000	1.43
 +++ writing-style/chapter.sgml	22 Feb 2005 14:29:20 -0000
 @@ -456,7 +456,7 @@
        </listitem>
  
        <listitem>
 -	<para>ports collection</para>
 +	<para>Ports Collection</para>
        </listitem>
  
        <listitem>
 
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