docs/77888: [PATCH] freebsd-questions article tweaks

Jesus R. Camou jcamou at cox.net
Mon Feb 21 22:30:23 UTC 2005


>Number:         77888
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] freebsd-questions article tweaks
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 22:30:22 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou at opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386

>Description:

	o cleatext -> clear text
	o spelt -> spelled

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- freebsd-questions.diff begins here ---
Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/freebsd-questions/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
diff -u -r1.23 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	9 Aug 2004 19:49:16 -0000	1.23
+++ article.sgml	21 Feb 2005 11:53:55 -0000
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@
       <para>The password fields in the subscription form provide only mild
         security, but should prevent others from messing with your
         subscription.  <emphasis>Do not use a valuable password</emphasis> as
-        it will occasionally be emailed back to you in cleartext.</para>
+        it will occasionally be emailed back to you in clear text.</para>
     </note>
 
     <para>You will receive a confirmation message from
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@
 	<para>Do not underestimate the effect that a poorly formatted mail
 	  message has, not just on the FreeBSD-questions mailing list.
 	  Your mail message is all people see of you, and if it is poorly
-	  formatted, one line per paragraph, badly spelt, or full of
+	  formatted, one line per paragraph, badly spelled, or full of
 	  errors, it will give people a poor impression of you.</para>
 
 	<para>A lot of badly formatted messages come from
--- freebsd-questions.diff ends here ---


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