docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes

[Jesus R. Camou]

The following reply was made to PR docs/77817; it has been noted by GNATS.

From: "Jesus R. Camou" <jcamou at cox.net>
To: Remko Lodder <remko at elvandar.org>
Cc: FreeBSD-gnats-submit at FreeBSD.org
Subject: Re: docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
Date: Mon, 21 Feb 2005 00:20:24 -0700

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 On Mon, Feb 21, 2005 at 06:21:31AM +0100, Remko Lodder wrote:
 > Jesus R. Camou wrote:
 > >>Number:         77817
 > >>Category:       docs
 > >>Synopsis:       [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
 > >>Confidential:   no
 > >>Severity:       non-critical
 > >>Priority:       medium
 > >>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
 > >>State:          open
 > >>Quarter:        
 > >>Keywords:       
 > >>Date-Required:
 > >>Class:          change-request
 > >>Submitter-Id:   current-users
 > >>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
 > >>Closed-Date:
 > >>Last-Modified:
 > >>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
 > >>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
 > >>Organization:
 > >>Environment:
 > >
 > >System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun 
 > >Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 
 > >jcamou at opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386
 > >
 > >
 > >>Description:
 > >
 > >
 > >	o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp at FreeBSD.org? Change this.
 > >	o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
 > >	o add white space: devicename -> device name
 > >
 > >
 > >>How-To-Repeat:
 > >
 > >
 > >>Fix:
 > >
 > >
 > >--- vinum.diff begins here ---
 > >Index: chapter.sgml
 > >===================================================================
 > >RCS file: 
 > >/home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
 > >retrieving revision 1.34
 > >diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
 > >--- chapter.sgml	11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000	1.34
 > >+++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
 > >@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 > > 	The Vinum Volume Manager
 > > 	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
 > > 
 > >-	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten at FreeBSD.org>
 > >+	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp at FreeBSD.org>
 > > 	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org>
 > > 
 > > 	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
 > >@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
 > > 	    start</command> command.</para>
 > > 
 > > 	  <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
 > >-	    needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above.  The setup required for
 > >-	    FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
 > >+	    needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above.  The setup required for
 > >+	    FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
 > > 	    linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
 > > 
 > > 	  <para>By placing the line:</para>
 > >@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
 > > 	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
 > > 	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
 > > 	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
 > >-	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
 > >+	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
 > > 	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
 > > 	</listitem>
 > >       </itemizedlist>
 > >--- vinum.diff ends here ---
 > >
 > >
 > >
 > >>Release-Note:
 > >>Audit-Trail:
 > >>Unformatted:
 > >
 > 
 > You are correct about the hmp address. However the .x to .X in the
 > version numbering already had been done yesterday.
 
 You're completely right about that, I don't know why I missed it.
 
 Here's an updated patch, thanks!
 
 -- 
 Jesus R. Camou <jcamou at COX.net>
 jcamou at es.FreeBSD.org
 
 
 
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 Index: chapter.sgml
 ===================================================================
 RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
 retrieving revision 1.36
 diff -u -r1.36 chapter.sgml
 --- chapter.sgml	20 Feb 2005 17:33:19 -0000	1.36
 +++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 07:13:23 -0000
 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
  	The Vinum Volume Manager
  	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
  
 -	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten at FreeBSD.org>
 +	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp at FreeBSD.org>
  	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org>
  
  	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
 @@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
  	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
  	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
  	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
 -	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
 +	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
  	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
  	</listitem>
        </itemizedlist>
 
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