docs/77817: [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes

[Jesus R. Camou]

>Number:         77817
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] vinum chapter (handbook) fixes
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       medium
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
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>Class:          change-request
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Feb 21 01:10:11 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Jesus R. Camou
>Release:        FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE i386
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>Environment:
System: FreeBSD opensea.mephis.org 4.11-STABLE FreeBSD 4.11-STABLE #0: Sun Feb 13 21:22:53 MST 2005 jcamou at opensea.mephis.org:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/HACKED i386

>Description:

	o Isn't Hiten Pandya's email hmp at FreeBSD.org? Change this.
	o s/4.x/4.X/ and s/5.x/5.X/
	o add white space: devicename -> device name

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>Fix:

--- vinum.diff begins here ---
Index: chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/vinum/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.34
diff -u -r1.34 chapter.sgml
--- chapter.sgml	11 Jan 2005 12:34:29 -0000	1.34
+++ chapter.sgml	21 Feb 2005 00:42:10 -0000
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
 	The Vinum Volume Manager
 	By Greg Lehey (grog at lemis dot com)
 
-	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hiten at FreeBSD.org>
+	Added to the Handbook by Hiten Pandya <hmp at FreeBSD.org>
 	and Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org>
 
 	For the FreeBSD Documentation Project
@@ -1078,8 +1078,8 @@
 	    start</command> command.</para>
 
 	  <note><para>The following paragraphs are outlining the steps
-	    needed for FreeBSD 5.x and above.  The setup required for
-	    FreeBSD 4.x differs, and is described below in <xref
+	    needed for FreeBSD 5.X and above.  The setup required for
+	    FreeBSD 4.X differs, and is described below in <xref
 	    linkend="vinum-root-4x">.</para></note>
 
 	  <para>By placing the line:</para>
@@ -1096,7 +1096,7 @@
 	    root device in <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>, and passes
 	    this information on to the kernel.	When it comes to mount
 	    the root filesystem, the kernel figures out from the
-	    devicename provided which driver to ask to translate this
+	    device name provided which driver to ask to translate this
 	    into the internal device ID (major/minor number).</para>
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
--- vinum.diff ends here ---


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