docs/77729: [patch] Update Handbook: Remove contractions

Sat Feb 19 13:40:16 UTC 2005

>Number:         77729
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] Update Handbook: Remove contractions
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Feb 19 13:40:15 GMT 2005
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.3-STABLE FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE #0: Thu Feb 10 12:46:21 CET 2005 joel at dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386

	
>Description:
Remove a few contractions in the handbook.  Patch attached.
	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:

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Index: firewalls/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/firewalls/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.36
diff -u -r1.36 chapter.sgml
--- firewalls/chapter.sgml	18 Feb 2005 12:08:24 -0000	1.36
+++ firewalls/chapter.sgml	19 Feb 2005 13:14:01 -0000
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
 	    <entry>PF is part of the base system.
 	      Do <emphasis>not</emphasis> use the
 	      <filename role="package">security/pf</filename> port
-	      on these versions of &os;.  It won't work.
+	      on these versions of &os;.  It will not work.
 	      Use the &man.pf.4; support of the base system instead.</entry>
 	  </row>
 	</tbody>
@@ -2587,7 +2587,7 @@
             may be allowed in by the later authorized service rules.
             Second reason is that by having a rule that explicitly
             blocks selected packets that I receive on an infrequent
-            bases and don't want to see in the log, this keeps them from
+            bases and do not want to see in the log, this keeps them from
             being caught by the last rule in the section which blocks
             and logs all packets which have fallen through the rules.
             The last rule in the section which blocks and logs all
Index: ports/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/ports/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.238
diff -u -r1.238 chapter.sgml
--- ports/chapter.sgml	13 Feb 2005 10:24:10 -0000	1.238
+++ ports/chapter.sgml	19 Feb 2005 13:13:04 -0000
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@
        <replaceable>string</replaceable> is some text to search for.
        This searches port names, comments, descriptions and
        dependencies and can be used to find ports which relate to a
-       particular subject if you don't know the name of the program
+       particular subject if you do not know the name of the program
        you are looking for.</para>
 
       <para>In both of these cases, the search string is case-insensitive.
Index: security/chapter.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /home/ncvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/security/chapter.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.262
diff -u -r1.262 chapter.sgml
--- security/chapter.sgml	13 Feb 2005 10:24:10 -0000	1.262
+++ security/chapter.sgml	19 Feb 2005 13:22:57 -0000
@@ -2425,7 +2425,7 @@
       <para>Now it is time to start up the <acronym>KDC</acronym> services.
 	Run <command>/etc/rc.d/kerberos start</command> and
 	<command>/etc/rc.d/kadmind start</command> to bring up the
-	services.  Note that you won't have any kerberized daemons running
+	services.  Note that you will not have any kerberized daemons running
 	at this point but you should be able to confirm the that the
 	<acronym>KDC</acronym> is functioning by obtaining and listing a
 	ticket for the principal (user) that you just created from the
@@ -2697,7 +2697,7 @@
 	      and reverse) in <acronym>DNS</acronym> (or
 	      <filename>/etc/hosts</filename> as a minimum).  CNAMEs
 	      will work, but the A and PTR records must be correct and in
-	      place. The error message isn't very intuitive:
+	      place. The error message is not very intuitive:
 	      <errorname>Kerberos5 refuses authentication because Read req
 	      failed: Key table entry not found</errorname>.</para>
 	  </listitem>
@@ -3371,7 +3371,7 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>The internal addresses of the two networks can be
-            public or private IP addresses, it doesn't matter.  You can
+            public or private IP addresses, it does not matter.  You can
             be running NAT on the gateway machine if necessary.</para>
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
@@ -3733,7 +3733,7 @@
         </listitem>
         <listitem>
           <para>There must be a mechanism for specifying which traffic
-            should be encrypted.  Obviously, you don't want to encrypt
+            should be encrypted.  Obviously, you do not want to encrypt
             all your outgoing traffic -- you only want to encrypt the
             traffic that is part of the VPN.  The rules that you put in
             place to determine what traffic will be encrypted are called
@@ -3811,7 +3811,7 @@
          this to encrypt the traffic over the VPN.  They periodically
          change this secret, so that even if an attacker were to crack one
          of the keys (which is as theoretically close to unfeasible as it
-         gets) it won't do them much good -- by the time they've cracked
+         gets) it will not do them much good -- by the time they have cracked
          the key the two daemons have chosen another one.</para>
  
        <para>racoon's configuration is stored in
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