docs/77437: Typos in gmirror(8) manual page
Paul A.Hoadley
paulh at logicsquad.net
Sun Feb 13 04:20:24 UTC 2005
>Number: 77437
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Typos in gmirror(8) manual page
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
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>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Sun Feb 13 04:20:23 GMT 2005
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>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Paul A. Hoadley
>Release: FreeBSD 5.3-STABLE i386
>Organization:
Logic Squad
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD grover.logicsquad.net 4.8-STABLE FreeBSD 4.8-STABLE #0: Mon May 12 16:58:58 CST 2003 paulh at grover.logicsquad.net:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GROVER i386
>Description:
Almost trivial typos in gmirror.8.
>How-To-Repeat:
man gmirror
>Fix:
Diff to gmirror.8 v1.11 attached. The first two are perhaps a little
subjective. (In fact, the first is not even an error. It just sounds
awkward. The second is similarly strictly correct, but sounds better
with a definite article.) The third should be changed to "List all
currently configured devices;" or "List every currently configured
device;". I chose the latter.
--- diff begins here ---
--- gmirror.8.orig Sun Feb 13 14:26:31 2005
+++ gmirror.8 Sun Feb 13 14:35:32 2005
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
.Sh DESCRIPTION
The
.Nm
-utility is used for mirrors (RAID1) configuration.
+utility is used for mirror (RAID1) configuration.
After a mirror's creation, all components are detected and configured
automatically.
All operations like failure detection, stale component detection, rebuild
@@ -114,7 +114,7 @@
Create a mirror.
The order of components is important, because a component's priority is based on its position
(starting from 0).
-The component with the biggest priority is used by prefer balance algorithm
+The component with the biggest priority is used by the prefer balance algorithm
and is also used as a master component when resynchronization is needed,
e.g.\& after a power failure when the device was open for writing.
.Pp
@@ -203,7 +203,7 @@
Stop the given mirror even if it is opened.
.El
.It Cm list
-List every currently configured devices; if a list of devices is passed as a
+List every currently configured device; if a list of devices is passed as a
parameter then only those devices will be shown.
.It Cm load
Load
--- diff ends here ---
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