docs/71712: Updates to the explaining-bsd article

Gavin Atkinson gavin.atkinson at ury.york.ac.uk
Mon Sep 13 22:40:40 UTC 2004


>Number:         71712
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       Updates to the explaining-bsd article
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Sep 13 22:40:29 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Gavin Atkinson
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.3-BETA2 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD buffy.york.ac.uk 5.3-BETA2 FreeBSD 5.3-BETA2 #9: Mon Sep 6 15:59:27 BST 2004 root at buffy.york.ac.uk:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GENERIC i386

>Description:
	Various updates to the explaining-bsd article to fix URLs,
bring it up-to-date with current situation, and reword a couple of sentances.

	Second patch contains white-space only changes.

	The patches don't conflict and can be applied successfully in either
order, although applying the whitespace patch first is probably best to not
affect the hunk offsets.

>How-To-Repeat:
	N/A
>Fix:

	(Patches also at http://www.devrandom.co.uk/freebsd/explbsdws.diff
for the whitespace changes, and http://www.devrandom.co.uk/freebsd/explbsd.diff
for the content changes)


Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/explaining-bsd/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.14 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	31 Aug 2004 06:51:40 -0000	1.14
+++ article.sgml	13 Sep 2004 22:04:05 -0000
@@ -34,7 +34,7 @@
 	synonymous with <quote>Operating System</quote>, but it is not the only
 	open source &unix; operating system.  According
 	to the <ulink
-         url="http://www.leb.net/hzo/ioscount/data/r.9904.txt">Internet
+          url="http://www.leb.net/hzo/ioscount/data/r.9904.txt">Internet
 	  Operating System Counter</ulink>, as of April 1999 31.3% of the
 	world's network connected machines run Linux.  14.6% run BSD &unix;.
 	Some of the world's largest web operations, such as <ulink
@@ -76,15 +76,15 @@
 
       <listitem>
 	<para>The C library, the base API for the system.</para>
-	  
+
 	<para><emphasis>The BSD C library is based on code from Berkeley, not
 	    the GNU project.</emphasis></para>
       </listitem>
-	  
+
       <listitem>
 	<para>Utilities such as shells, file utilities, compilers and
 	  linkers.</para>
-	
+
 	<para><emphasis>Some of the utilities are derived from the GNU
 	    project, others are not.</emphasis></para>
       </listitem>
@@ -177,9 +177,9 @@
   
   <sect1>
     <title>Why is BSD not better known?</title>
-    
+
     <para>For a number of reasons, BSD is relatively unknown:</para>
-    
+
     <orderedlist>
       <listitem>
 	<para>The BSD developers are often more interested in polishing their
@@ -459,11 +459,11 @@
 	</listitem>
       </itemizedlist>
     </sect2>
-    
+
     <sect2>
       <title>How does the BSD license differ from the GNU Public
 	license?</title>
-      
+
       <para>Linux is available under the
 	<ulink url="http://www.fsf.org/copyleft/gpl.html">GNU General Public
 	  License</ulink> (GPL), which is designed to eliminate closed
@@ -500,17 +500,17 @@
 
       <para>What does this all mean in practice?  Who should use BSD, who
 	should use Linux?</para>
-      
+
       <para>This is a very difficult question to answer.  Here are some
 	guidelines:</para>
-      
+
       <itemizedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para><quote>If it ain't broke, don't fix it</quote>: If you already
 	    use an open source operating system, and you are happy with it,
 	    there is probably no good reason to change.</para>
 	</listitem>
-	
+
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>BSD systems, in particular FreeBSD, can have notably higher
 	    performance than Linux.  But this is not across the board.  In many
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@
 
     <sect2>
       <title>Who provides support, service, and training for BSD?</title>
-      
+
       <para>BSDi have always supported BSD/OS, and they have recently
 	announced support contracts for FreeBSD.</para>



Index: article.sgml
===================================================================
RCS file: /usr/cvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/explaining-bsd/article.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.14
diff -u -r1.14 article.sgml
--- article.sgml	31 Aug 2004 06:51:40 -0000	1.14
+++ article.sgml	13 Sep 2004 22:18:23 -0000
@@ -21,6 +21,7 @@
 
     <legalnotice id="trademarks" role="trademarks">
       &tm-attrib.freebsd;
+      &tm-attrib.amd;
       &tm-attrib.apple;
       &tm-attrib.linux;
       &tm-attrib.opengroup;
@@ -39,8 +40,8 @@
 	world's network connected machines run Linux.  14.6% run BSD &unix;.
 	Some of the world's largest web operations, such as <ulink
           url="http://www.yahoo.com/">Yahoo!</ulink>, run BSD.  The world's
-	busiest FTP server, <ulink
-          url="ftp://ftp.cdrom.com/">ftp.cdrom.com</ulink>, uses BSD to
+	busiest FTP server of 1999 (now defunct), <ulink
+          url="ftp://ftp.cdrom.com/">ftp.cdrom.com</ulink>, used BSD to
 	transfer 1.4 TB of data a day.    Clearly this is not a niche
 	market: BSD is a well-kept secret.</para>
 
@@ -93,8 +94,9 @@
 	<para>The X Window system, which handles graphical display.</para>
 
 	<para>The X Window system used in most versions of BSD is maintained
-	  by a separate project, the
-	  <ulink url="http://www.XFree86.org/">&xfree86; project</ulink>.
+	  by one of two separate projects, either the
+	  <ulink url="http://www.XFree86.org/">&xfree86; project</ulink> or the
+	  <ulink url="http://www.X.org/">X.Org project</ulink>.
 	  This is the same code as Linux uses.  BSD does not normally
 	  specify a <quote>graphical desktop</quote> such as GNOME or KDE,
 	  though these are available.</para>
@@ -246,7 +248,8 @@
       <para>No one person or corporation owns BSD. It is created and
 	distributed by a community of highly technical and committed
 	contributors all over the world. Some of the components of BSD are
-	Open Source projects managed by a different project maintainer.</para>
+	Open Source projects in their own right and managed by different
+	project maintainers.</para>
     </sect2>
 
     <sect2>
@@ -255,7 +258,7 @@
       <para>The BSD kernels are developed and updated following the Open
 	Source development model.  Each project maintains a publicly
 	accessible <emphasis>source tree</emphasis> under the
-	<ulink url="http://www.sourcegear.com/CVS/">Concurrent Versions
+	<ulink url="http://www.cvshome.org/">Concurrent Versions
 	  System</ulink> (CVS), which contains all source files for the
 	project, including documentation and other incidental files.  CVS
 	allows users to <quote>check out</quote> (in other words, to
@@ -312,7 +315,7 @@
       <orderedlist>
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>No one person controls the content of the system.  In
-	    practice, this difference is overrated, since the Chief Architect
+	    practice, this difference is overrated, since the Principal Architect
 	    can require that code be backed out, and even in the Linux project
 	    several people are permitted to make changes.</para>
 	</listitem>
@@ -411,7 +414,10 @@
 	<listitem>
 	  <para>FreeBSD aims for high performance and ease of use by
 	    end users, and is a favourite of web content providers.  It runs
-	    on PCs and Compaq's Alpha processors.  The FreeBSD project has
+	    on a number of platforms, including i386 based systems (<quote>PCs</quote>),
+	    systems based on the AMD 64-bit processors, &ultrasparc; based systems,
+	    systems based on Compaq's Alpha processors and systems based around
+	    the NEC PC-98 specification.  The FreeBSD project has
 	    significantly more users than the other projects.</para>
 	</listitem>
 
 
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