docs/72462: [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article

[Joel Dahl]

>Number:         72462
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [PATCH] A few minor corrections to the hubs article
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Sat Oct 09 11:00:40 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Joel Dahl
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD dude.automatvapen.se 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE-p9 #1: Sat Jul 10 16:52:28 CEST 2004 root at dude.automatvapen.se:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/WORKSTATION i386


	
>Description:
	Attached patch includes grammatical fixes and a few corrections.

>How-To-Repeat:

>Fix:

--- hub.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml	Sat Oct  2 18:25:55 2004
+++ new.article.sgml	Sat Oct  9 12:27:48 2004
@@ -162,8 +162,8 @@
           FTP distributions. FTP access must be
           anonymous, and no upload/download ratios
           are allowed (a ridiculous thing anyway).
-          Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must</emphasis>
-          never be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
+          Upload capability is not required (and <emphasis>must never</emphasis>
+          be allowed for the FreeBSD file space).
           Also the FreeBSD archive should be available under
           the path <filename>/pub/FreeBSD</filename>.
         </para>
@@ -666,28 +666,25 @@
          environment variables, like
          <literal>SGML_CATALOG_FILES</literal>.
          Also have a look at your <filename>/etc/make.conf</filename>
-         (copy <filename>/etc/defaults/make.conf</filename> if
+         (copy <filename>/usr/share/examples/etc/make.conf</filename> if
          you do not have one), and look at the
          <literal>DOC_LANG</literal> variable.
          Now you are probably ready to run <command>make</command>
-         in you doc directory (<filename>/usr/share/doc</filename>
+         in your doc directory (<filename>/usr/share/doc</filename>
          by default) and build the documentation.
          Again you need to make it accessible for your web server
          and make sure the links point to the right location.
          <important>
            <para>
              The building of the documentation, as well as lots
-             of side issues, is documented itself in:
+             of side issues, is documented itself in the
              <ulink url="http://www.FreeBSD.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/">fdp-primer</ulink>.
              Please read this piece of documentation, especially if you
              have problems building the documentation.
            </para>
          </important>
-         <note>
-           <para>
-           XXX MAYBE THIS CAN BE LINKED FROM WITHIN - NOT USING AN ABSOLUTE URL XXX
-           </para>
-         </note>
+          <!--  XXX MAYBE THIS CAN BE LINKED FROM WITHIN - NOT USING AN
+         ABSOLUTE URL XXX -->
        </para>
      </sect3>
    </sect2>
@@ -845,7 +842,7 @@
         </procedure>
       </sect3>
       <sect3 id="mirror-where-official">
-        <title>I'm an official mirror, what is the right site for me?</title>
+        <title>I am an official mirror, what is the right site for me?</title>
         <para>
           In general the description in <xref linkend="mirror-where-simple">
           still applies. Of course you may want to put some
--- hub.diff ends here ---


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