docs/70583: [PATCH] Update freebsd-glossary
Murray Stokely
murray at freebsd.org
Wed Nov 17 22:27:32 UTC 2004
Hi Joel, thanks for the submissions. I've noticed that many of your
submissions don't use a serial comma so they stick out when compared
with the rest of our documentation set.
Please see :
http://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/writing-style.html#WRITING-STYLE-GUIDE
> <glossterm>Unix File System Version 2</glossterm>
> <acronym>UFS2</acronym>
> <glossdef>
> - <para></para>
> + <para>An extension to <acronym>UFS1</acronym>, introduced in
> + &os; 5-CURRENT. <acronym>UFS2</acronym> adds 64 bit block
> + pointers (breaking the 1T barrier), support for extended file
> + storage, and a few other things.
extended file attributes, and other enhancements. ?
> + </para>
> </glossdef>
> </glossdiv>
> @@ -1762,7 +1775,10 @@
> <glossterm>Virtual Private Network</glossterm>
> <acronym>VPN</acronym>
> <glossdef>
> - <para></para>
> + <para>A way to use a public telecommunication
> + infrastructure, such as the Internet, to provide remote
> + users with a secure connection to their organizations
organization's ?
Murray
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