docs/66823: [patch] usr.sbin/pccard/pccardd/pccard.conf.5 tyops, grammar, and wording

Michel Lavondès fox at vader.aacc.cc.md.us
Tue May 18 17:10:18 UTC 2004


>Number:         66823
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] usr.sbin/pccard/pccardd/pccard.conf.5 tyops, grammar, and wording
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          doc-bug
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Tue May 18 10:10:16 PDT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Michel Lavondès
>Release:        4.8-RELEASE-p13
>Organization:
Ecdysiasts United For Overdressing
>Environment:
>Description:
Patch says it all, really.
>How-To-Repeat:
man 5 pccard.conf
>Fix:
--- pccard.conf.5.orig	Sat May  8 20:11:04 2004
+++ pccard.conf.5	Sat May  8 20:19:12 2004
@@ -169,7 +169,7 @@
 parameters are the Manufacturer name, card version and
 additional information add_info1, add_info2 that
 is used to match the values from the card's CIS memory.
-These parameter can be described in extended regular expression
+These parameters can be described in extended regular expressions
 .Xr regex 3
 if the string is enclosed by '/' like "/.*/".
 Each of the expressions is evaluated with a character '^' at top.
@@ -247,18 +247,18 @@
 matches ``Functional ID: Serial port/modem'' and
 .Em fixed_disk
 matches ``Fixed disk card''.
-The syntax is the same of
+The syntax is the same as for
 .Em "card identifiers"
-but used ``generic'' instead of ``card'' in the first line.
-These are in the last of
+but uses ``generic'' instead of ``card'' in the first line.
+These must be last in
 .Nm
-because unmatched cards with the other
+because cards not matched by a previous
 .Em card
-entries can match these entries secondly.
-The alias ``function'' can be used instead of ``generic'' because of
-the historical reason.
+entry can match these.
+The alias ``function'' can be used instead of ``generic'' for
+historical reasons.
 .Sh EXAMPLES
-A typical configuration file may appear thus:
+A typical configuration file may look like this:
 .Bd -literal
 #
 # Sample configuration file.
>Release-Note:
>Audit-Trail:
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