[REVIEW REQUEST]: New chapter on MAC (draft)

[Josef El-Rayes]

Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org> wrote:
> Hey FreeBSD-doc,
> 
> I've written a new chapter for the handbook on implementing the
> MAC features in 5.X.  It includes configuration, testing, module
> description that augments the section we already have, and shows
> examples of the policies.
> 
> I'm not worried about whitespace right now, only correctness in the
> information presented, markup, and wording.

hi tom!

i had a look at your work and found 4 very minor mistakes.
i attach my patch.

greets, josef

ps: looks very nice, both the framework and the documentation, looks
like i have to test this soon :)
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--- chapter.sgml.orig	Mon May 10 23:08:53 2004
+++ chapter.sgml	Mon May 10 23:50:01 2004
@@ -24,14 +24,14 @@
    <indexterm><primary>Mandatory Access Controls</primary></indexterm>
 
    <para>With security requirements on a rise throughout much of the
-     the world, the demand for a more secure environment has
+     world, the demand for a more secure environment has
      increased.  It is from this demand that the TrustedBSD project
      was founded with nothing more than security in mind.  The
-     TrustedBSD project has aimed at developing userland utilities and kernel
+     TrustedBSD project aimes at developing userland utilities and kernel
      interfaces, based on the <acronym>POSIX</acronym>.1e standard, and merging it
      back to &os; 5.X.  While still in the development stage,
      many of the features are nearing production stability.  Some of
-     those include file system access control lists
+     those include file system Access Control Lists
      (<acronym>ACLs</acronym>) and Mandatory Access Control
      (<acronym>MAC</acronym>) mechanisms.</para>
 
@@ -1147,7 +1147,7 @@
 
     <para>The <acronym>MAC</acronym> version of the Low-watermark
       integrity policy, not to be confused with the older &man.lomac.4;
-      implementation, works almost identical to Biba but with a the
+      implementation, works almost identical to Biba but with the
       exception of using floating labels to support subject
       demotion via an auxiliary grade compartment.  This secondary
       compartment takes the form of [auxgrade].  When assigning a
@@ -1635,4 +1635,4 @@
      sgml-always-quote-attributes: t
      sgml-parent-document: ("../book.sgml" "part" "chapter")
      End:
--->
\ No newline at end of file
+-->
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