docs/68799: Fix a couple language nits in tuning.7
Chris Pepper
pepper at reppep.com
Thu Jul 8 04:00:46 UTC 2004
>Number: 68799
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: Fix a couple language nits in tuning.7
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: doc-bug
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Thu Jul 08 04:00:46 GMT 2004
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Chris Pepper
>Release: FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD guest.reppep.com 5.2.1-RELEASE FreeBSD 5.2.1-RELEASE #1: Thu Jun 17 23:50:42 EDT 2004 root at guest.reppep.com:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/REPPEP5 i386
>Description:
tuning.7 has some minor problems (effects used where affects should be, and similar).
>How-To-Repeat:
man tuning
>Fix:
Patch like so:
--- tuning.7.patch begins here ---
--- /usr/src/share/man/man7/tuning.7 Sun Sep 14 19:44:55 2003
+++ tuning.7 Wed Jul 7 23:53:53 2004
@@ -582,9 +582,9 @@
interactive connections, especially over slow modems, will also be able
to operate with lower round trip times.
However, note that this feature
-only effects data transmission (uploading / server-side).
+only affects data transmission (uploading / server-side).
It does not
-effect data reception (downloading).
+affect data reception (downloading).
.Pp
Adjusting
.Va net.inet.tcp.inflight_stab
@@ -625,8 +625,8 @@
This most commonly occurs when you are
running a heavily loaded web proxy.
The port range is not an issue
-when running serves which handle mainly incoming connections, such as a
-normal web server, or has a limited number of outgoing connections, such
+when running servers which handle mainly incoming connections, such as a
+normal web server, or have a limited number of outgoing connections, such
as a mail relay.
For situations where you may run yourself out of
ports, we recommend increasing
--- tuning.7.patch ends here ---
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