docs/61628: Mistake in Handbook, section 8.6.4 passwd
Warren Block
wblock at wonkity.com
Wed Jan 21 05:26:07 UTC 2004
On Tue, 20 Jan 2004, Ceri Davies wrote:
> > Users must type in ther original password before changing their
> > password, to prevent an unauthorized person from changing their password
> > when the user is away from their console.
>
> Losing the comma would result in a grammatically correct, though
> unwieldy, sentence. The easiest way to deal with is to move "before
> changing their password," to the beginning of the sentence.
Still unwieldy, though. This may be a little better:
To prevent accidental or unauthorized changes, the original password
must be entered before a new password may be set.
(And "may be set" looks wrong, but it's late and I can't come up with
anything else except "assigned", which also looks wrong...)
-Warren Block * Rapid City, South Dakota USA
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