docs/56901: [patch] articles/diskless-x: fix bad english

Josef El-Rayes j.el-rayes at daemon.li
Mon Sep 15 20:30:30 UTC 2003


>Number:         56901
>Category:       docs
>Synopsis:       [patch] articles/diskless-x: fix bad english
>Confidential:   no
>Severity:       non-critical
>Priority:       low
>Responsible:    freebsd-doc
>State:          open
>Quarter:        
>Keywords:       
>Date-Required:
>Class:          update
>Submitter-Id:   current-users
>Arrival-Date:   Mon Sep 15 13:30:26 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator:     Josef El-Rayes
>Release:        FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gina.at 5.1-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT #1: Sat Sep 13 13:22:16 CEST 2003 root at gina.at:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GINA i386


	
>Description:
		doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml:


	
>How-To-Repeat:
	
>Fix:
		the expression "foobar'd" definitely does not belong into a
		serious text.
	

--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig	Mon Sep 15 18:15:01 2003
+++ article.sgml	Mon Sep 15 18:53:58 2003
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
     <para>Compile the <quote>net-boot</quote> programs that are located in
       <filename>/usr/src/sys/i386/boot/netboot</filename>.  You should read
       the comments at the top of the <filename>Makefile</filename>.  Adjust as
-      required.  Make a backup of the original in case it gets foobar'd.  When
+      required.  Make a backup of the original in case something goes wrong.  When
       the build is done, there should be 2 &ms-dos; executables,
       <filename>nb8390.com</filename> and <filename>nb3c509.com</filename>.
       One of these two programs will be what you need to run on the diskless
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---


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