docs/56901: [patch] articles/diskless-x: fix bad english
Josef El-Rayes
j.el-rayes at daemon.li
Mon Sep 15 20:30:30 UTC 2003
>Number: 56901
>Category: docs
>Synopsis: [patch] articles/diskless-x: fix bad english
>Confidential: no
>Severity: non-critical
>Priority: low
>Responsible: freebsd-doc
>State: open
>Quarter:
>Keywords:
>Date-Required:
>Class: update
>Submitter-Id: current-users
>Arrival-Date: Mon Sep 15 13:30:26 PDT 2003
>Closed-Date:
>Last-Modified:
>Originator: Josef El-Rayes
>Release: FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT i386
>Organization:
>Environment:
System: FreeBSD gina.at 5.1-CURRENT FreeBSD 5.1-CURRENT #1: Sat Sep 13 13:22:16 CEST 2003 root at gina.at:/usr/obj/usr/src/sys/GINA i386
>Description:
doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/articles/diskless-x/article.sgml:
>How-To-Repeat:
>Fix:
the expression "foobar'd" definitely does not belong into a
serious text.
--- article.sgml.diff begins here ---
--- article.sgml.orig Mon Sep 15 18:15:01 2003
+++ article.sgml Mon Sep 15 18:53:58 2003
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@
<para>Compile the <quote>net-boot</quote> programs that are located in
<filename>/usr/src/sys/i386/boot/netboot</filename>. You should read
the comments at the top of the <filename>Makefile</filename>. Adjust as
- required. Make a backup of the original in case it gets foobar'd. When
+ required. Make a backup of the original in case something goes wrong. When
the build is done, there should be 2 &ms-dos; executables,
<filename>nb8390.com</filename> and <filename>nb3c509.com</filename>.
One of these two programs will be what you need to run on the diskless
--- article.sgml.diff ends here ---
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>Audit-Trail:
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