Pre-commit review requested

[Tom Rhodes]

On Mon, 08 Sep 2003 15:56:07 -0700
"Michael K. Smith" <mksmith at noanet.net> wrote:

> On 9/8/03 11:22 AM, "Tom Rhodes" <trhodes at freebsd.org> wrote:
> 
> > Any -doc committer want to review the following patch.  It is by no
> > way an in depth cleanup, but it will take us (myself anyway) one
> > step further toward my goal of a good security chapter.
> > 
> > This diff:
> > 
> > o Adds <application>, <acronym>, and other tags as required.
> > o Uses the &os; entity.
> > o Cleans up the introduction by pointing out what
> > version of Kerberos is in what FreeBSD Release.
> > o Modifies <indexterm> and title's to help seperate KerberosIV and Kerberos5.
> > 
> > I'm only looking for either objections or "please commit"s and would rather
> > not bounce this around for the next three days.  Thanks!
> 
> Shouldn't:
> 
> +    <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;,
> +      such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and MD5.</para>
> 
> Be:
> 
> +    <para>About the various crypt mechanisms available in &os;,
> +      such as <acronym>DES</acronym> and <acronym>MD5</acronym>.</para>
> 

I incorporated this into my commit, thanks!

-- 
Tom Rhodes