Quick review requested

[Tom Rhodes]

On Tue, 30 Sep 2003 20:36:37 -0400
Jim Brown <jpb at sixshooter.v6.thrupoint.net> wrote:

> * Tom Rhodes <trhodes at FreeBSD.org> [2003-09-30 18:03]:
> > Gang,
> > 
> > I'd really appreciate some feedback on the text below.  If anyone
> > would like the full patch (images, Makefile, etc) please speak up
> > and I'll send it.
> > 
> > Whitespace in added text will be fixed before the initial cvs ci,
> > so comments on short/long lines are not required.
> > 
> > Thanks!
> > 
> > -- 
> > Tom Rhodes
> > 
> 
> 
> Comments inline- sorry.  I don't have my doc stuff set up on this system
> so I can't check what it looks like visually.
> 

Thank you Jim, and everyone who sent me comments either on list or
off.  They are always extremely helpful in noticing my sometimes
trivial mistakes.

-- 
Tom Rhodes