Is this correct?
Tom Rhodes
trhodes at FreeBSD.org
Tue May 20 21:27:58 UTC 2003
On Tue, 20 May 2003 22:22:00 +0100
Ceri Davies <setantae at submonkey.net> wrote:
>
> I'm pretty sure that this patch is correct, but not 100%. Comments?
>
> Ceri
> --
>
> Index: sgml-markup/chapter.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/fdp-primer/sgml-markup/chapter.sgml,v
> retrieving revision 1.54
> diff -u -r1.54 chapter.sgml
> --- sgml-markup/chapter.sgml 20 May 2003 21:18:38 -0000 1.54
> +++ sgml-markup/chapter.sgml 20 May 2003 21:20:33 -0000
> @@ -674,7 +674,7 @@
>
> <para>Some elements may exist in two forms, <emphasis>formal</emphasis>
> and <emphasis>informal</emphasis>. Typically, the formal version of
> - the element will consist of a title followed by the information
> + the element will consist of a title followed by the informal
> version of the element. The informal version will not have a
> title.</para>
> </note>
>
This, looks correct. Mainly the fact that the next line talks about
the 'informal version'.
--
Tom Rhodes
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