Small handbook error in section 12.9.8.2

Craig Reyenga craig at craig.afraid.org
Mon Jun 30 07:55:44 UTC 2003


Hi,

I caught a small error in section 12.9.8.2 "After the Disaster", paragraph
two:

"If the hardware has been damaged. First, replace those parts that have been
damaged."
The first sentence is a fragment, I suggest it should read:

"If any hardware has been damaged, replace those parts before attempting to
use the computer."

Or something to that effect. Just doing what I can :)

-Craig




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