Small handbook error in section 12.9.8.2
Craig Reyenga
craig at craig.afraid.org
Mon Jun 30 07:55:44 UTC 2003
Hi,
I caught a small error in section 12.9.8.2 "After the Disaster", paragraph
two:
"If the hardware has been damaged. First, replace those parts that have been
damaged."
The first sentence is a fragment, I suggest it should read:
"If any hardware has been damaged, replace those parts before attempting to
use the computer."
Or something to that effect. Just doing what I can :)
-Craig
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