Rtp cluster diff

Tue Jul 1 13:55:39 UTC 2003

On 2003.07.01 11:54:54 +0400, Maxim Konovalov wrote:

> Here is a separate page for Rtp cluster.  I will going to commit it in
> two days, please review.  It was prepared by John mostly, all bugs are
> mine.  Thanks!

In general I prefer to make HTML indented like the SGML, but I know that
many of the other webpages aren't, so it might just be me.

> Index: rtp.sgml
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: rtp.sgml
> diff -N rtp.sgml
> --- /dev/null	1 Jan 1970 00:00:00 -0000
> +++ rtp.sgml	1 Jul 2003 07:47:28 -0000
> @@ -0,0 +1,165 @@
> +<!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 Transitional//EN" [
> +<!ENTITY base CDATA "..">
> +<!ENTITY date "$FreeBSD$">
> +<!ENTITY title "The Rtp.FreeBSD.org Network">
> +<!ENTITY % includes SYSTEM "../includes.sgml"> %includes;
> +]>
> +
> +<html>
> +&header;
> +
> +<p>This page documents the machine resources currently
> +available in the Rtp.FreeBSD.Org network for use by

I think it should be Rtp.FreeBSD.org.  Similar for the other FreeBSD.org
references.

> +the FreeBSD committers.

Missing </p>.

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+<tr>
+<td>9ball</td>
+<td>CURRENT</td>

Perhaps 5-CURRENT like machines.sgml.  Same for the other CURRENT
references.

+<td>periodic -current isos showing up on releng4</td>
+<td>committers</td>
+</tr>

[CUT]
> +<p>Home directory services are provided by a dedicated NFS/Raid5

I would use RAID, since its an acronym.

[CUT]

Just my 0.02 euro cents, use as you like.

-- 
Simon L. Nielsen
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