Proposed addition to the mail section of the handbook

[Christian Brueffer]

On Mon, Dec 01, 2003 at 11:18:25PM +0100, Josef El-Rayes wrote:
> Bill Moran <wmoran at potentialtech.com> wrote:
> > In all seriousness, I'm not totally confident with docbook 
> > yet, so suggestions
> > on all levels are appreciated.  (at least I got make to 
> > stop complaining ;)
> 
> hy, i had a look at your patch and i have following suggestions:
> 
> line 27: &man.send-pr.1; which creates a link to the
> send-pr manualpage.
> 
> line 45: the dot should not be inside the apostrophes.
> 
> line 48: Execute the following commands as root. <- shouldn't
> this end with ':' instead of '.'?
> 
> line 47+48: mark ssmtp port up with
> <filename role="package">mail/ssmtp</filename>
> 
> line 51: i think it is common practice in the handbook
> to propose "make install clean" for installations.
> 
> line 53: i would markup ssmtp with application tag
> 
> line 26+32: why is there a different identing? as far
> as i can see, both lines are on same level.
> 
> line 56-60: what about indenting here?
> 
> line 71: s/ssmpt/ssmtp
> 
> line 72: it is "manpage" not "man page".
> 

Actually it is 'manual page'.

- Christian

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