docs/50677: [PATCH] update doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml

[Sergey A. Osokin]

On Mon, Apr 07, 2003 at 07:49:55PM -0700, Murray Stokely wrote:
> Synopsis: [PATCH] update doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml
> 
> State-Changed-From-To: open->feedback
> State-Changed-By: murray
> State-Changed-When: Mon Apr 7 19:46:21 PDT 2003
> State-Changed-Why: 
> Arghh.. I just lost my extensive comments about this patch.  The short
> of it is that this doesn't even validate (missing tags, etc..) and the
> English is ambiguous.  I think every sentence needs revision.  Here is
> the last bit of my previous comment that I was able to salvage from my
> editor on freefall :
> 
> "The NEWCARD implementation for PC-card does not work for me." ..
> 
> Also, The cbb0 line might be better if enclosed in <errorname>.
> 
> I won't go on, but each entry needs extensive grammatical improvement
> as well as some markup changes.
> 
> Maybe someone else can work with you to improve the English?
> 
> It would be nice to add these technical issues to the FAQ.
> 
> Thanks for your time spent writing this up.  Your contributions are
> appreciated.
> 
> http://www.freebsd.org/cgi/query-pr.cgi?pr=50677

OK, please review next version of patch http://ozz.pp.ru/patches/patch-faq
Thanks.

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