git: 0da5e909e9c9 - stable/12 - release.7: update for current context

[Gordon Bergling]

The branch stable/12 has been updated by gbe (doc committer):

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=0da5e909e9c97c8937fec68888eea674fd59a081

commit 0da5e909e9c97c8937fec68888eea674fd59a081
Author:     Ed Maste <emaste at FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2020-09-01 15:30:40 +0000
Commit:     Gordon Bergling <gbe at FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2021-05-08 04:47:16 +0000

    release.7: update for current context
    
    It's no longer unusual to be able to build a release with a single
    command, so drop "actually" that hints at a surprise.  Also just use
    "network install directory" instead of referencing FTP; it's more
    likely to be HTTP now.
    
    Reviewed by:    gjb
    Sponsored by:   The FreeBSD Foundation
    Differential Revision:  https://reviews.freebsd.org/D26260
    
    (cherry picked from commit 55c9a224e2a9c01d461003837ff6563803b63210)
---
 share/man/man7/release.7 | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/share/man/man7/release.7 b/share/man/man7/release.7
index cd25a86c985e..02ee2dfc0e5e 100644
--- a/share/man/man7/release.7
+++ b/share/man/man7/release.7
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
 .\"
 .\" $FreeBSD$
 .\"
-.Dd January 16, 2020
+.Dd September 1, 2020
 .Dt RELEASE 7
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -40,9 +40,9 @@ All of the tools necessary to build a release are available from the
 .Fx
 source code repository in
 .Pa src/release .
-A complete release can actually be built with only a single command,
+A complete release can be built with only a single command,
 including the creation of ISO images suitable for burning to CD-ROM,
-memory stick images, and an FTP install directory.
+memory stick images, and a network install directory.
 This command is aptly named
 .Dq Li "make release" .
 .Pp
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ assurance, or other aspects of the release engineering process.
 .Sh CLEAN RELEASE GENERATION
 Official releases of
 .Fx
-are produced in a totally clean environment to
+are produced in a clean environment to
 ensure consistency between the versions of the src, ports, and doc trees
 and to avoid contamination from the host system
 .Po such as local patches, changes