[src] cvs commit: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml

[Daniel Gerzo]

Hello Bruce,

Thursday, August 31, 2006, 4:54:06 PM, you wrote:

> bmah        2006-08-31 14:53:57 UTC

>   FreeBSD src repository

>   Modified files:        (Branch: RELENG_5)
>     release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml 

> +    <para><application>netcat</application> has been updated from the
> +      version in a 4 February 2005 OpenBSD snapshot to the version
> +      included in OpenBSD 3.9.</para>
> +

Maybe it should be better to write it like:

netcat has been updated from the version included in OpenBSD snapshot
as of February 4th 2005 to the version included in OpenBSD 3.9. ?


>      <para><application>sendmail</application> has been updated from
>        8.13.6 to 8.13.8.</para>
>  


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Best regards,
 Daniel                            mailto:danger at FreeBSD.org