cvs commit: src/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml

[Bruce A. Mah]

On Sun, 2004-09-05 at 02:21, Hiroki Sato wrote:
> hrs         2004-09-05 09:21:32 UTC
> 
>   FreeBSD src repository
> 
>   Modified files:
>     release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/common new.sgml 
>   Log:
>   Update release notes:
>           - Various markup, typo, and wording fixes.
>           - Use &man.*;.
>           - Move sound(4) related changes to the multimedia support section.
>           - Add net.inet.tcp.rfc3042 and net.inet.tcp.rfc3390.
>           - Unify items which relates to multibyte support of userland
>             utilities.

Couple of comments (please forgive the text wrapping in the diff
below)...

In the following hunk, the article "the" probably shouldn't be added
because there is already an article "an" on the previous line.  I didn't
want to just revert the change because it modifies one of my prior
changes; this could give the (incorrect) impression of a backout war.

@@ -1301,7 +1447,7 @@
     <para>&man.ppp.8; now supports a
       <quote>set pppoe [standard|3Com]</quote> command
       to configure the operating mode of an underlying
-      &man.ng.pppoe.4; NetGraph node.</para>
+      the &man.ng.pppoe.4; Netgraph node.</para>

     <para>&man.ps.1; compatibility with POSIX/SUSv3 has been improved.
       The changes include <option>-p</option> for a list of process
IDs,

I like that the markup for library names is now consistent.  I'm not
100% sure that <application></application> is the best choice; I usually
used <filename></filename>.  But in any case I think this change was an
improvement.

Thanks, keep up the good work!

Bruce.

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