cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq book.sgml
Marc Fonvieille
blackend at FreeBSD.org
Sat Jun 21 10:52:16 UTC 2008
On Sat, Jun 21, 2008 at 12:41:50PM +0200, Gabor PALI wrote:
> Marc Fonvieille wrote:
> > This should be avoided; in our docset (e.g., mail chapter in the
> > Handbook) "sendmail" is used not "Sendmail. We don't change the case of
> > a command/daemon/application cause of the beginning of a sentence, if we
> > have to start a sentence we use "The Nm. utility" scheme. This helps
> > consistency and prevents confusions when it comes to type a command.
>
> Thank you for your comment. Would you approve my fix? (See [1])
>
>
> :g
>
> [1]
> http://people.freebsd.org/~pgj/for_review/2008-06-21/books.faq.patch.193.diff
>
I'd add some words, see below:
Index: book.sgml
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RCS file: /home/dcvs/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/faq/book.sgml,v
retrieving revision 1.1003
diff -u -r1.1003 book.sgml
--- book.sgml 21 Jun 2008 08:36:19 -0000 1.1003
+++ book.sgml 21 Jun 2008 10:39:43 -0000
@@ -3370,7 +3370,7 @@
<qandaentry>
<question id="mail-loopback">
- <para>Why does Sendmail give me an error reading
+ <para>Why does <application>sendmail</application> give me an error reading
<errorname>mail loops back to
myself</errorname>?</para>
</question>
@@ -6020,7 +6020,7 @@
</question>
<answer>
- <para><ulink url="http://www.sendmail.org/"><application>Sendmail</application></ulink> is
+ <para>The <ulink url="http://www.sendmail.org/"><application>sendmail</application></ulink> is
^
|_ server
the default mail-server software for FreeBSD, but you can
easily replace it with one of the other MTA (for instance,
an MTA installed from the ports).</para>
@@ -8197,7 +8197,7 @@
<qandaentry>
<question id="sendmail-port-587">
- <para><application>Sendmail</application> is listening on port 587 as well as the
+ <para>The <application>sendmail</application> is listening on port 587 as well as the
^
|_ daemon
standard port 25! What is going on?</para>
</question>
--
Marc
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