cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml

[Murray Stokely]

murray      2004-07-09 09:27:11 UTC

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  Modified files:
    en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml 
  Log:
  * Fix grammar mistakes and redundant clauses in the first paragraph.
  * Remove 'as more features are added, they will be added here'.  That
    goes without saying for the entire Handbook.
  * Break up a list of disagreeing clauses into two separate sentences.
  * Replace a colon with a semicolon.
  * Remove colorful language describing some users as irrational in
    favor of more succinct exposition.
  
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