cvs commit: doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml

[Hiten Pandya]

That's even better, I will make the change shortly.  Thanks Ceri and
Tom!

Hiten Pandya
hmp at freebsd.org

On Tue, 7 Dec 2004, Ceri Davies wrote:

 :On Tue, Dec 07, 2004 at 07:28:34PM +0000, Hiten Pandya wrote:
 :> hmp         2004-12-07 19:28:34 UTC
 :> 
 :>   FreeBSD doc repository
 :> 
 :>   Modified files:
 :>     en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/mac chapter.sgml 
 :>   Log:
 :>   Correct last commit.
 :>   
 :>   Noticed by: trhodes, ceri
 :
 :Thanks Hiten.  I still think the sentence is still backwards though.
 :
 :> | @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
 :> |  	  discussing <acronym>MLS</acronym>.  A sensitivity level is
 :> |  	  a term used to describe how important or secret the data
 :> |  	  should be.  As the sensitivity level increases, so does the
 :> | -	  importance of the secrecy (or confidentiality) of the date.</para>
 :> | +	  importance of the secrecy, or confidentiality of the data.</para>
 :
 :I think it should read:
 :
 :As the confidentiality of the data or importance of the secrecy
 :increases, so does the sensitivity level.
 :
 :Ceri
 :-- 
 :Only two things are infinite, the universe and human stupidity, and I'm
 :not sure about the former.			  -- Einstein (attrib.)
 :