From nobody Fri Mar 08 14:33:15 2024 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4TrpYp0vJXz5DFx4 for ; Fri, 8 Mar 2024 14:33:18 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4TrpYl48rlz4bql for ; Fri, 8 Mar 2024 14:33:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1709908395; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=q7yqiuIbn9IvnCofHxatAP/99gremTBqKxh9bPJTtbMs+tA0OBoIzWYpKkx3AMaj64EEiP XLJYm/cAbPYzLZ5Y8fCL2eRU2cPEeQZTcD7mbppco7i9kl3CMxZ9Tr7fPiE+4csb60Hsxz 3BjVQeG/vqz71BY9FqCmOfjJ/2vzKOgv99YDZrrLFtnfoaBHXoAhwFI6nDYmTCiluFETfz 5ZUvJZf9HswqL82gEgEBED2VED0d5BHSaBcUu+Zi3bbTQgWlxgwDYlHiFhjwE0/pLfArzC vrDNHX8znuMe4GJ508DWNtTHh0KIFdtINceRK0sf0Tp6NVD6WMJiM8yZx7MOdA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1709908395; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=WkJnuKsaXqOJjPNV4HRvdyX76G1kXfEuN9naNKhDvEE=; b=OaMEdBkIuC6InoYKRsxnr8bNqC9qsSECc5DAiDKZYSegKEnHBqXCZq3y2TeNb4SdtbpuwG RP4luo8k6L2VrYvRYytJwn6cRoY0ZuKBQbDz5teXkGCNka+QXmdXefaOYDddU93+tosU9I q2YAgMabOLfoUKggjeDDdF5ulyZBKvyuMHuXJdCalC1L58QMhq/hB9pQb2lcY/LKFAA2Wp BpjKuOQTZhXOrY6dkQJ0yc2HFRJLaFYL/Ec1Rcmt91YU70P6FRQHFrTcsTwIWrTwnPO9GV x4J/5MDtI970KieAoqxGSgrixLs+GVcUHyuEp4M1aQBmJIwnB+31tR/HqRDWhg== Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4TrpYl3lbhzMcb for ; Fri, 8 Mar 2024 14:33:15 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 428EXFxq093213 for ; Fri, 8 Mar 2024 14:33:15 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 428EXFXO093211 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Fri, 8 Mar 2024 14:33:15 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 248562] [meta] intro man pages: review, revamp, update Date: Fri, 08 Mar 2024 14:33:15 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo CC X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Manual Pages X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: needs-qa, tracking X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Many People X-Bugzilla-Who: concussious.bugzilla@runbox.com X-Bugzilla-Status: In Progress X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D248562 --- Comment #6 from Alexander Ziaee --- Here's what I've got so far for intro(1). I want to update this page concisely without bloating or mangling it. It's previous state is extremely eloquent and concise, and I'd like to see that preserved. https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-src/pull/1136 --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug. You are on the CC list for the bug.=