From nobody Wed Sep 20 18:08:51 2023 X-Original-To: doc@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4RrRP01B8xz4tyfX for ; Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:52 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4RrRNz5CqSz3Ltt for ; Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1695233331; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=qBclEPLp+zSNuzpGkDQIERUMKhZ2yrhcjD2idneBaSIVbaawbzsQDePTjkMuGLA3mA4OFN AJxAvEpaz2vb0RSWFGF5VAiStJO6EiamQkY8tlnban9Nv4w4yAIgEKEhTaUanZ5sOf2hb9 xYJlkIUmd/B8Ifp1ypryO/xVZLw+fIfzarLaAwkl1I4QWmhSr8r8AMkVjpeYiJeNs74WFQ A3F1GhDT605xclo0Pi4hfA7Igm0tGjkUE8Caz0XrMmvoRqElnKrT9N4YTvY5gklzdEPDaX 65lPmUjBlpLe+Aro8A/aZsx4tPSQHTp1SAhFR9WG8L9rcqSHEq5Hu6+T6scTDA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1695233331; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=TpPuQKuh2nQNSxPT/PiDeoqksFvxw8AJEhxJuhMwiww=; b=DoxkNaq4RxQVUTONJ7pER9kySEusgrN++vGzkEJZzOkGisk4+M/delCnfubwjcWujZXogF pOvlb+rAXjwK4XYAEAWvszYVqOEhU4l+6n+X8T3OzmMH1Cj+XGZiVY30OjKGhNvAtHIR2j YjVtAUcD7taCE8QCd6W4x0jfz4RbYI0tjT3EDt5bCY47+pnF04D3LbaN/pFryyZU9BvpCU q8qQaDVdIZsmRvetgK1DtmyryllVIEwdabAQdHrKjU/qcgLMT2jQl9oqUYSa2zwo9tjMEm 5Np9aJ3nnq1fSPGmsS63pnH9VkQHA4Ahg/i4B2UfQeYDAfgTx989trWKjisWgw== Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4RrRNz4KSqz15X7 for ; Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 38KI8pbl032955 for ; Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 38KI8pBj032954 for doc@FreeBSD.org; Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: doc@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 273983] Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter Date: Wed, 20 Sep 2023 18:08:51 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: AssignedTo X-Bugzilla-Type: new X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Books & Articles X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Many People X-Bugzilla-Who: bspiegel100@gmail.com X-Bugzilla-Status: New X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: doc@FreeBSD.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: bug_id short_desc product version rep_platform op_sys bug_status bug_severity priority component assigned_to reporter attachments.created Message-ID: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Documentation project List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-doc List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-doc@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D273983 Bug ID: 273983 Summary: Handbook: Minor issues and TODO in new Jails chapter Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Many People Priority: --- Component: Books & Articles Assignee: doc@FreeBSD.org Reporter: bspiegel100@gmail.com Created attachment 245074 --> https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/attachment.cgi?id=3D245074&action= =3Dedit Suggested patch I've just finished reading the new Jails chapter in the handbook (https://cgit.freebsd.org/doc/commit/?id=3D612b7cc1). It looks terrific--carlavilla@ did a great job rewriting this chapter! I spotted some minor issues: one TODO placeholder to add a missing xref and various nitpicky grammar and style issues throughout (e.g. typos, comma splices, serial comma, title case, etc.). Attached is a patch with suggested fixes and copyedits. I corrected the usa= ge but tried to avoid any substantive changes. Happy to adjust if you have feedback or questions. Thanks for considering! --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=