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s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1648887498; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=B2HY3op5xPLjVjNZquQCIxff6v5n6g/ZAgWwy0+OzyBfO/+If3DTdpKw2YdCk3ugV+6wwb 6uV4eihKOexiCyghqROj05OOKegb0SlhVcrF2AsXcV9mh0nEqGjlV3GFxcQ2UWl9Nejda5 IjNFQ8ZLoejpPhSmPDEAyINvk0dqYQc4s0mazyLWUeUqDu1rEgDEGRKnTVkYcpnKie5QBs qHiu/DiNvMAanLwa/KbDBIrMCIpuPmLRu9W+OAwF30O0K4oK019c+op1amLLjUYJwgLV7H zREfj68XtLByZdkqXK4lu3qhU3P2hjLdjHBlac93Vjhaw8/gGAD2VTirK8F8Ow== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D262998 Bug ID: 262998 Summary: Mixture of singular and plural, and possible excess white space, in the manual page for bectl(8) Product: Documentation Version: Latest Hardware: Any URL: https://github.com/freebsd/freebsd-src/commit/c0f846ff 235296249271b1235ff6a52b7d23cefb?diff=3Dunified#diff-c02 d05827bafa5f8205b59bd5e53274a6043030b432b47ffcb9bb7907 bb5d5f5R395-R396 OS: Any Status: New Severity: Affects Some People Priority: --- Component: Manual Pages Assignee: bugs@FreeBSD.org Reporter: grahamperrin@gmail.com CC: doc@FreeBSD.org, kevans@freebsd.org > The other style of boot environments in use, frequently called deep boot= =20 > environments, organizes some or all of the boot environment =E2=80=A6 =E2=80=93 should probably be:=20 > The other style of boot environment in use, frequently called deep boot=20 > environment, organizes some or all of the boot environment =E2=80=A6 =F0=A0=84=B2=E2=80=92 singular, not plural, in two places.=20 Sorry, I should have noticed this during the review , but I find it difficult to read when marked up. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are the assignee for the bug.=