From nobody Sun Aug 06 17:59:10 2023 X-Original-To: arch@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 4RJnJb2rM7z4mB3V for ; Sun, 6 Aug 2023 17:59:11 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4RJnJb1dgBz4Kdd for ; Sun, 6 Aug 2023 17:59:11 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1691344751; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=WOHOe3JI2yggHUsmnVIjuyvvy63d23njowvJ8v7pTdQ=; b=hijgFZ1Hk02fglOIR3ZnMecKuYTg9e8oftX+71v3owLeF5gWrzNm/OqgSC/J52lqZlLPqF 9chAaNKekeXROrNNX+ufwOun0ZXp7iOesVNrYYYyKVAFW/HXocw11+sV3N0t26aptkerkU zSLRNQ0jGfdfP7vv9T88qztRMuJzCWh3za5PJluIQSMwPUKjey6WI40zZwsIhCvK8s4YXI 2nOUsUD9hyGUDEsTpLKr9ren0moJfvYFZAF/3eyeuo8kINMnKbqvY8VngR0kxhD2n67HJQ 3DeixHVt9x9BGs/pZk8fm+oBqexy7nFED3tdWY0tyUQakdNE5452p3cX+dmjVg== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1691344751; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=iiiX9K6geYHdVHBQhF81r2zf2PCciwP09ddl3+4YpBRznjBXEPpbJnfwTi+pXS6Lvk5MbT A4y8ZLt0IVME13RGCmOYbssqpf5mdn1ICmbndOZ4UT+BHbNHrhOTXygKrn5ZM3dcP5BHRf NeoFQsJe8yBMZ+lyZ+f7wdFdKN0fN9KP4n6FAwlNCtOz/JvTicU9+i2usHPY4umn1HHgAM vZcSitB5puF3L7IiYY16FaRvP6t+ws56xKqEg1vch1XtP9CxN4Az3n2injfTAR3uGI8Lq3 3+udHweBv3a6lnrLRBh0OZ89dn83Qa2NgZjETJG6Vva86SgCovuigqwKc77CVQ== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org (kenobi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::50:1d]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4RJnJb0clzz553 for ; Sun, 6 Aug 2023 17:59:11 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: from kenobi.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.5]) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2) with ESMTP id 376HxBif019061 for ; Sun, 6 Aug 2023 17:59:11 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) Received: (from www@localhost) by kenobi.freebsd.org (8.15.2/8.15.2/Submit) id 376HxBaT019060 for arch@FreeBSD.org; Sun, 6 Aug 2023 17:59:11 GMT (envelope-from bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org) X-Authentication-Warning: kenobi.freebsd.org: www set sender to bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org using -f From: bugzilla-noreply@freebsd.org To: arch@FreeBSD.org Subject: [Bug 270481] intro(9) needs an update/rewrite Date: Sun, 06 Aug 2023 17:59:10 +0000 X-Bugzilla-Reason: CC X-Bugzilla-Type: changed X-Bugzilla-Watch-Reason: None X-Bugzilla-Product: Documentation X-Bugzilla-Component: Manual Pages X-Bugzilla-Version: Latest X-Bugzilla-Keywords: X-Bugzilla-Severity: Affects Only Me X-Bugzilla-Who: grahamperrin@gmail.com X-Bugzilla-Status: In Progress X-Bugzilla-Resolution: X-Bugzilla-Priority: --- X-Bugzilla-Assigned-To: mhorne@freebsd.org X-Bugzilla-Flags: X-Bugzilla-Changed-Fields: cc Message-ID: In-Reply-To: References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset="UTF-8" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable X-Bugzilla-URL: https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/ Auto-Submitted: auto-generated List-Id: Discussion related to FreeBSD architecture List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/freebsd-arch List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-freebsd-arch@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 https://bugs.freebsd.org/bugzilla/show_bug.cgi?id=3D270481 Graham Perrin =E2=97=90 changed: What |Removed |Added ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- CC| |grahamperrin@gmail.com --- Comment #4 from Graham Perrin =E2=97=90 --- A great improvement, thanks.=20 includes one correction, = and suggests a few other minor changes. --=20 You are receiving this mail because: You are on the CC list for the bug.=