From nobody Tue Jan 11 02:51:38 2022 X-Original-To: dev-commits-ports-main@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id B582C193DC41; Tue, 11 Jan 2022 02:51:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:3]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4JXwFQ35FRz4ZwS; Tue, 11 Jan 2022 02:51:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org (gitrepo.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:6068::e6a:5]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256) (Client did not present a certificate) by mxrelay.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4BDAB11519; Tue, 11 Jan 2022 02:51:38 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from git@FreeBSD.org) Received: from gitrepo.freebsd.org ([127.0.1.44]) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.16.1/8.16.1) with ESMTP id 20B2pcBV067824; Tue, 11 Jan 2022 02:51:38 GMT (envelope-from git@gitrepo.freebsd.org) Received: (from git@localhost) by gitrepo.freebsd.org (8.16.1/8.16.1/Submit) id 20B2pcM9067823; Tue, 11 Jan 2022 02:51:38 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Tue, 11 Jan 2022 02:51:38 GMT Message-Id: <202201110251.20B2pcM9067823@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: ports-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-ports-all@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-ports-main@FreeBSD.org From: Alexey Dokuchaev Subject: git: 281b577e6913 - main - graphics/proj: further improve port installation message text List-Id: Commits to the main branch of the FreeBSD ports repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-ports-main List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-ports-main@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-ports-main@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: danfe X-Git-Repository: ports X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: 281b577e6913e2cc00cd3dd730de728d99e29eec Auto-Submitted: auto-generated ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1641869498; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; bh=jSeFZsXeYfttn6NoHLl0FE9kBtcMOW6saro7Ju58U1Y=; b=hi5ecc19zm8Z1EEsc7zDHOgWB2gpAxnnAHt5kxYPSmLJGDVpyI+7khMjTPB9Q+fXy4u1tw Yq1DB9yjc/Ocieiw9/3LKYb0SgZMYpIJ2v2dJWIKT/o/Jv0MHDwzPnhG8CKVFGKZHi+Y0+ awU0ENd8tzUDRO3DQbxVz6lI/y/ANctMdbc/EP85TiFHO3+zlgOxIhCJcbgQLycDEw+xsX /JIgFcY18v6Tt9xZ6EmsmLHQO/BFFCtmuUmTpt2LgY/FF/rlwVkqYNNR85fn4sAloBaKpL w+vpsNB2d6ZV1TQxhZosUreZD+W2JILI7kwv8stYIeUbDV+oGQZWKfb7NjZJMw== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1641869498; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=szPP4ENBVTgcuUA+lMzUKltJ6Ak0wqmzBP0A8f3j2xJOwRF9wXjHN1jyOKb7rfnu5uQzox 7TC8gyAp2VNR2uSPLG2wx6SAilpxSyJ+fbX6PdlO6pbXBPFjdKBn8CZDzAtWw7FNv+Fp2A y2lcQnOIUaUzMtuyeFHysEGSF/PvOtrvW1yJUko63yccmVICL823aeZAbNRnMxJZR0eRZx QwJHyz1sc0H4X7j7nvNevrSV4jKUTFJr0nnAZCp6V0Zjj1LL0h3YKgMLFHsgHyF+7zlHWO KFg/TtszLpzOoAzjZ4n3hBhZaf+2HZd5Du1vJ/9lk+dJbnvfCxdB8un68H5nWA== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N The branch main has been updated by danfe: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/ports/commit/?id=281b577e6913e2cc00cd3dd730de728d99e29eec commit 281b577e6913e2cc00cd3dd730de728d99e29eec Author: Alexey Dokuchaev AuthorDate: 2022-01-11 02:51:12 +0000 Commit: Alexey Dokuchaev CommitDate: 2022-01-11 02:51:12 +0000 graphics/proj: further improve port installation message text Follow up on commit 595b35fa1f9f and fix a few minor textual nits: - Terminate `cf.' with the period as it is an abbreviation - Avoid addressing the reader using `you/your' pronouns - Use correct units (it refers to gigabytes, not gigabits) - Expand contractions (dir -> directory), reduce tautology, wrap overly long lines, etc. --- graphics/proj/files/pkg-message.in | 24 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/graphics/proj/files/pkg-message.in b/graphics/proj/files/pkg-message.in index c5331a9f8fce..7af40eee1843 100644 --- a/graphics/proj/files/pkg-message.in +++ b/graphics/proj/files/pkg-message.in @@ -1,27 +1,27 @@ [ { type: install message: <