git: f2be69ba3c - main - release archetype: minor tweaks

The branch main has been updated by cperciva:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=f2be69ba3cae4ad46aee3ad89385ffbfb8e27516

commit f2be69ba3cae4ad46aee3ad89385ffbfb8e27516
Author:     Colin Percival <cperciva@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2024-03-18 04:58:27 +0000
Commit:     Colin Percival <cperciva@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2024-03-20 00:51:52 +0000

    release archetype: minor tweaks
    
    Make link markup less verbose; adjust some text to match what was used in
    recent releases.
---
 website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc | 11 ++++++-----
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc b/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc
index fc7452f16a..fb4ae6f935 100644
--- a/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc
+++ b/website/archetypes/release/relnotes.adoc
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@ It describes recently added, changed, or deleted features of FreeBSD.
 It also provides some notes on upgrading from previous versions of FreeBSD.
 
 The {releaseType} distribution to which these release notes apply represents the latest point along the {releaseBranch} development branch since {releaseBranch} was created.
-Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/].
+Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[].
 
 The {releaseType} distribution to which these release notes apply represents a point along the {releaseBranch} development branch between {releasePrev} and the future {releaseNext}.
-Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/].
+Information regarding pre-built, binary {releaseType} distributions along this branch can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[].
 
 This distribution of FreeBSD {releaseCurrent} is a {releaseType} distribution.
-It can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/] or any of its mirrors.
+It can be found at https://www.FreeBSD.org/releases/[] or any of its mirrors.
 More information on obtaining this (or other) {releaseType} distributions of FreeBSD can be found in the link:{handbook}/mirrors[Obtaining FreeBSD appendix] to the link:{handbook}/[FreeBSD Handbook].
 
 All users are encouraged to consult the release errata before installing FreeBSD.
@@ -57,7 +57,8 @@ Clearly the release notes cannot list every single change made to FreeBSD betwee
 == Upgrading from Previous Releases of FreeBSD
 
 Binary upgrades between RELEASE versions (and snapshots of the various security branches) are supported using the man:freebsd-update[8] utility.
-The binary upgrade procedure will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC kernels distributed as a part of an official FreeBSD release.
+See the release-specific upgrade procedure, link:../installation/#upgrade-binary[FreeBSD {releaseCurrent} upgrade information], with more details in the FreeBSD handbook link:{handbook}cutting-edge/#freebsdupdate-upgrade[binary upgrade procedure].
+This will update unmodified userland utilities, as well as unmodified GENERIC kernels distributed as a part of an official FreeBSD release.
 The man:freebsd-update[8] utility requires that the host being upgraded have Internet connectivity.
 
 Source-based upgrades (those based on recompiling the FreeBSD base system from source code) from previous versions are supported, according to the instructions in [.filename]#/usr/src/UPDATING#.
@@ -171,7 +172,7 @@ This section describes changes that affect networking in FreeBSD.
 [[hardware]]
 == Hardware Support
 
-This section covers general hardware support for physical machines, hypervisors, and virtualizatio n environments, as well as hardware changes and updates that do not otherwise fit in other sections of this document.
+This section covers general hardware support for physical machines, hypervisors, and virtualization environments, as well as hardware changes and updates that do not otherwise fit in other sections of this document.
 
 Please see link:https://www.freebsd.org/releases/X.0R/hardware[the list of hardware] supported by {releaseCurrent}, as well as link:https://www.freebsd.org/platforms/[the platforms page] for the complete list of supported CPU architectures.