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Sat, 2 Mar 2024 07:19:24 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Sat, 2 Mar 2024 07:19:24 GMT Message-Id: <202403020719.4227JOJN071310@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Colin Percival Subject: git: 54eabe62ae - main - 13.3: Minor docs fixes List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: cperciva X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: 54eabe62ae156976290ebe8ac577beed390b1c30 Auto-Submitted: auto-generated The branch main has been updated by cperciva: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=54eabe62ae156976290ebe8ac577beed390b1c30 commit 54eabe62ae156976290ebe8ac577beed390b1c30 Author: Colin Percival AuthorDate: 2024-03-02 07:18:15 +0000 Commit: Colin Percival CommitDate: 2024-03-02 07:18:15 +0000 13.3: Minor docs fixes A few wording nits, plus adding a link to the Release Notes from the installation instructions which refer to them. --- website/content/en/releases/13.3R/installation.adoc | 2 +- website/content/en/releases/13.3R/readme.adoc | 4 ++-- 2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/installation.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/installation.adoc index 50b501592c..4d4a165f68 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/installation.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/installation.adoc @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ The link:{handbook}bsdinstall/[Installing FreeBSD] chapter of the FreeBSD Handbo [[upgrade]] == Upgrading FreeBSD -If you are upgrading from a previous release of FreeBSD, please read upgrading section in the Release Notes for notable incompatibilities carefully. +If you are upgrading from a previous release of FreeBSD, please read the upgrading section in the link:../relnotes[Release Notes] for notable incompatibilities carefully. [[upgrade-source]] == Upgrading from Source diff --git a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/readme.adoc b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/readme.adoc index ed5ec61bd1..9169110486 100644 --- a/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/readme.adoc +++ b/website/content/en/releases/13.3R/readme.adoc @@ -46,14 +46,14 @@ A large collection of third-party ported software (the Ports Collection) is also [[audience]] == Target Audience -This {releaseType} of FreeBSD is suitable for all users. It has undergone a period of testing and quality assurance checking to ensure the highest reliability and dependability. +This {releaseType} of FreeBSD is suitable for all users. It has undergone a period of testing and quality assurance to ensure the highest reliability and dependability. [[obtain]] == Obtaining FreeBSD FreeBSD may be obtained in a variety of ways. The most convenient way is to download a release image. -Links to images for recent releases can be found on the FreeBSD Web site's +Links to images for recent releases can be found on the FreeBSD Web site link:../../../where/[download page]. This page includes information about the different types of images available as well as other ways to obtain a copy of FreeBSD.