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Wed, 29 Jun 2022 20:41:06 GMT (envelope-from git) Date: Wed, 29 Jun 2022 20:41:06 GMT Message-Id: <202206292041.25TKf6XH023391@gitrepo.freebsd.org> To: doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org From: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado Subject: git: fdceb99e22 - main - Improve vocabulary in FDP overview chapter List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=utf-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Git-Committer: carlavilla X-Git-Repository: doc X-Git-Refname: refs/heads/main X-Git-Reftype: branch X-Git-Commit: fdceb99e222c8ce9eb585b9ed0dfa8e569e6aa1d Auto-Submitted: auto-generated ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1656535266; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding; 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Submit the diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. If using the web form, enter a Summary of _[patch] short description of problem_. Select the Component `Documentation`. In the Description field, enter a short description of the changes and any important details about them. Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the diff file. Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system. +. Submit the patch or diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. If using the web form, enter a Summary of _[patch] short description of problem_. Select the Component `Documentation`. In the Description field, enter a short description of the changes and any important details about them. Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the patch or diff file. Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system. ==== [[gnu-linux-installation-process]] @@ -229,11 +229,11 @@ To make it easier for committers to apply the patch on their working copy of the please generate the [.filename]#.diff# from the base of your documentation tree. ====== + -. Submit the diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. +. Submit the patch or diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. If using the web form, enter a Summary of _short description of problem_. Select the Component `Documentation`. In the Description field, enter a short description of the problem in the _Summary_ field and add _patch_ to the _Keywords_ field. -Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the diff file. +Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the patch or diff file. Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system. ==== @@ -311,11 +311,11 @@ To make it easier for committers to apply the patch on their working copy of the please generate the [.filename]#.diff# from the base of your documentation tree. ====== + -. Submit the diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. +. Submit the patch or diff file using the web-based https://bugs.FreeBSD.org/bugzilla/enter_bug.cgi?product=Documentation[Problem Report] system. If using the web form, enter a Summary of _short description of problem_. Select the Component `Documentation`. In the Description field, enter a short description of the problem in the _Summary_ field and add _patch_ to the _Keywords_ field. -Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the diff file. +Use the btn:[Add an attachment] button to attach the patch or diff file. Finally, use the btn:[Submit Bug] button to submit your diff to the problem report system. ====