From nobody Wed Apr 13 17:09:53 2022 X-Original-To: dev-commits-doc-all@mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org Received: from mx1.freebsd.org (mx1.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::19:1]) by mlmmj.nyi.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTP id 613791B329B7 for ; Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:09:55 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Received: from smtp.freebsd.org (smtp.freebsd.org [IPv6:2610:1c1:1:606c::24b:4]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) server-digest SHA256 client-signature RSA-PSS (4096 bits) client-digest SHA256) (Client CN "smtp.freebsd.org", Issuer "R3" (verified OK)) by mx1.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 4KdpxH215Vz51Zq; Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:09:55 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1649869795; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=HlMOCKk46ZoDXGCn8q9E6HONJxDl51QWVYw+ielev+w=; b=BQXn/0kD4jvW89vq5Yiq86C3t9MNrxQkd96DsWHOch6GNjXGZoCiXORxy9H/Jq2BfZjiP1 7hFanxvdR4zNcto9wdYoFUI0DACBdAuEWzdn5dwshnTyt1Dy4tEusdE6ntDidxHw8T3YsW yzaFEURGJzGS65xoa1WqerHG0Ewn8gdFRsZjSbG/b2hQxD95n1zirVgyKzaY8Vebhl0ekq IomZF5tKOymvk0drI0dxrzCmPqhRCLljtmIJIYgVwuZoMcVZLH6gx7pUlEoFIEh8Gxg+cM 7I/vcLr4GdEHOErDS0QNWhE71rPL1lgZjDLjtLdy/O4/yrtF4hMxbS254k4PyA== Received: from [10.0.1.4] (ralph.baldwin.cx [66.234.199.215]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (Client did not present a certificate) (Authenticated sender: jhb) by smtp.freebsd.org (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id B5F0B2DB41; Wed, 13 Apr 2022 17:09:54 +0000 (UTC) (envelope-from jhb@FreeBSD.org) Message-ID: <36b6607e-6a32-cfb0-06fc-ccafeb00409f@FreeBSD.org> Date: Wed, 13 Apr 2022 10:09:53 -0700 List-Id: Commit messages for all branches of the doc repository List-Archive: https://lists.freebsd.org/archives/dev-commits-doc-all List-Help: List-Post: List-Subscribe: List-Unsubscribe: Sender: owner-dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org X-BeenThere: dev-commits-doc-all@freebsd.org MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Macintosh; Intel Mac OS X 10.15; rv:91.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/91.7.0 Subject: Re: git: c4e48b65b7 - main - 13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative. Content-Language: en-US To: Mike Karels , doc-committers@FreeBSD.org, dev-commits-doc-all@FreeBSD.org References: <202204130133.23D1X0Hx031524@gitrepo.freebsd.org> From: John Baldwin In-Reply-To: <202204130133.23D1X0Hx031524@gitrepo.freebsd.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit ARC-Message-Signature: i=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=freebsd.org; s=dkim; t=1649869795; h=from:from:reply-to:subject:subject:date:date:message-id:message-id: to:to:cc:mime-version:mime-version:content-type:content-type: content-transfer-encoding:content-transfer-encoding: in-reply-to:in-reply-to:references:references; bh=HlMOCKk46ZoDXGCn8q9E6HONJxDl51QWVYw+ielev+w=; b=VzfwjjRH66XSMALQx26Ja8EjC7HCpROWwHWnbuQrP5rcjQQu7PubZKkiSOaBLWuNyGcnPR 4fgUYIHNzbDshtolpDROy0EJDsP4PHEjtPYK9jSmhzSCvl6H2hZris5l6Wdoi29C5eG0F0 caP0SrFUj+uoTDClMRKndOMcdgrJryoojbVLwuuKS17GWErF/41SKAXJcg3JYjhUAnVX8F sSpOS0zgh/Xcc7GE7/vbnpGG+C1uNfLAZFuYxS5HD7vqHSaXRsLO7xSVwqbzvEE1agQf8f uHem5xx7hOnXqIXwR4Ox2TuU0G2OHMFd766VGPXAmhZkgYYQUmIUh17vAkdGQA== ARC-Seal: i=1; s=dkim; d=freebsd.org; t=1649869795; a=rsa-sha256; cv=none; b=ch9TZmV3c2CfT3cg4oZA3RcmfZsVd0XcM+ZIgbn7c2VnDBjwrJujvE0UM942J2D9iZsmwQ GzWyya6R1XeUq9ZO1xy8/RN9auIOAHbVWeiRGv3oPW+mOYPjzeYk9gZTLf4govJxhYfcyR D2Cr/mwm6qV+s+di1Ms2lgYEAMzWcynZrxWI90/+F8p+qExhaWjMBJ2GN6RYWJSBXkX/z2 d5sA1HTPQemkoy9QplKbN6dIeVXCMw/DvcgBGJBAEsy6HIoQ0kQTagxlcQoET8cqH15oWn 5l7h6s+GknfKmW31TcM3ufYp89PHhgxtj0yaF61eXUxVVOhrqJKtUxeqx+pxXg== ARC-Authentication-Results: i=1; mx1.freebsd.org; none X-ThisMailContainsUnwantedMimeParts: N On 4/12/22 6:33 PM, Mike Karels wrote: > The branch main has been updated by karels (src committer): > > URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=c4e48b65b76ff0ae15de17969d152233eeac83c4 > > commit c4e48b65b76ff0ae15de17969d152233eeac83c4 > Author: Mike Karels > AuthorDate: 2022-04-12 21:40:17 +0000 > Commit: Mike Karels > CommitDate: 2022-04-13 01:32:44 +0000 > > 13.1 relnotes: Change previous entries to avoid imperative. > > Change previous entries from "Add ..." to "... has been added", > etc, for consistency. > > Reviewed by: pauamma_gundo.com > Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D34892 Hmm, for 13.0 we explicitly used active voice rather than passive. I don't know that we have a definitive style guide for release notes though. -- John Baldwin