git: 41a7d1606e - main - fdp-primer/writing-style: redo some parts of rev 2f4edf696b

The branch main has been updated by ceri:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=41a7d1606e49829d12e1ddcfe5c17401db06d7e6

commit 41a7d1606e49829d12e1ddcfe5c17401db06d7e6
Author:     Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2023-05-11 20:24:20 +0000
Commit:     Ceri Davies <ceri@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2023-05-11 20:24:20 +0000

    fdp-primer/writing-style: redo some parts of rev 2f4edf696b
---
 .../content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc         | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc
index 935025d090..fe9d704a8b 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/fdp-primer/writing-style/_index.adoc
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ Similarly, every major vendor and company has specific rules on writing their br
 Care should be taken to be respectful to the brand value of others and to take time to write PostgreSQL, Node.js, Let's Encrypt etc.
 Missing brand names should be added to the [.filename]#.vale/styles/FreeBSD/BrandTerms.yml# in the `doc` repository.
 
-. FreeBSD.ConsciousLanguage: This rule proposes use of conscious languages so that sensitive words pointing to the color, age, race, sexual orientation of people are avoided where possible.
+. FreeBSD.ConsciousLanguage: This rule proposes use of conscious language so that sensitive words pointing to the color, age, race, or sexual orientation of people are avoided where possible.
 
 . FreeBSD.Contractions: Contracted words should not be used.
 This rule avoids all contractions and suggests full words.
@@ -326,14 +326,14 @@ This rule proposes better wording.
 . FreeBSD.SuperfluousOptArgInLinks: Suggest to empty square brackets in `link:` macros when the displayed text coincides with the URL.
 
 . Vale.Avoid: Enforces the *DO NOT USE* vocabulary terms for The FreeBSD Project.
-If any word is found that should not be n the documentation the word should be added to the [.filename]#.vale/styles/Vocab/Terms/reject.txt# in the `doc` repository.
+If any word is found that should not be in the documentation, the word should be added to [.filename]#.vale/styles/Vocab/Terms/reject.txt# in the `doc` repository.
 The list is empty at the moment.
 
 . Vale.Repetition: Same words are often typed twice when leaving the keyboard and rejoining the work again.
 This rule finds repeated words and warns the users.
 
-. Vale.Spelling: At the moment there is a mix of en_US and en_UK spellings in the documentation and website.
-Vale comes with an in built dictionary from which uses strictly en_US and do not accept the en_UK variant of any words.
+. Vale.Spelling: At the moment there is a mix of en_US and en_GB spellings in the documentation and website.
+Vale comes with an in built dictionary from which uses strictly en_US and do not accept the en_GB variant of any words.
 
 . Vale.Terms: Enforces the *PREFERRED* vocabulary terms for The FreeBSD Project.
 At the moment the list of terms is empty and the FreeBSD specific terms will be added gradually.