git: 5665239ce1 - main - handbook: Style fixes

From: Edward Tomasz Napierala <trasz_at_FreeBSD.org>
Date: Tue, 25 Jan 2022 11:56:06 UTC
The branch main has been updated by trasz:

URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/doc/commit/?id=5665239ce1451acf5e3fc1aa6515ac7189b17bbd

commit 5665239ce1451acf5e3fc1aa6515ac7189b17bbd
Author:     Edward Tomasz Napierala <trasz@FreeBSD.org>
AuthorDate: 2022-01-25 11:55:16 +0000
Commit:     Edward Tomasz Napierala <trasz@FreeBSD.org>
CommitDate: 2022-01-25 11:55:21 +0000

    handbook: Style fixes
    
    Submitted By:   Pau Amma
    Reviewed By:    Pau Amma
    Sponsored By:   EPSRC
    Differential Revision:  https://reviews.freebsd.org/D33985
---
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc | 3 ++-
 documentation/content/en/books/handbook/linuxemu/_index.adoc     | 4 ++--
 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc
index 976fb7f174..77fa5f9303 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/introduction/_index.adoc
@@ -271,13 +271,14 @@ More information on packages and ports can be found in crossref:ports[ports,Inst
 === Additional Documentation
 
 All supported FreeBSD versions provide an option in the installer to install additional documentation under [.filename]#/usr/local/share/doc/freebsd# during the initial system setup.
-Documentation may also be installed at any later time using packages:
+Documentation may also be installed later using packages:
 [source,shell]
 ....
 # pkg install en-freebsd-doc
 ....
 
 For localized versions replace the "en" with language prefix of choice.
+Be aware that some of the localised versions might be out of date and might contain information that is no longer correct or relevant.
 You may view the locally installed manuals with a web browser using the following URLs:
 
 The FreeBSD Handbook::
diff --git a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/linuxemu/_index.adoc b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/linuxemu/_index.adoc
index ff7b75b739..858a399ca3 100644
--- a/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/linuxemu/_index.adoc
+++ b/documentation/content/en/books/handbook/linuxemu/_index.adoc
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ The easiest way to install Linux libraries is to install package:emulators/linux
 ....
 
 FreeBSD provides packages for some Linux binary applications.
-For example, to install Sublime Text 4, along all the Linux libraries it depends on, run this command:
+For example, to install Sublime Text 4, along with all the Linux libraries it depends on, run this command:
 [source,shell]
 ....
 # pkg install linux-sublime-text4
@@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ If the bootstrapped instance is intended to provide Linux shared libraries witho
 compat.linux.emul_path="/compat/ubuntu"
 ....
 
-This sysctl controls kernel's path translation mechanism; see the man:linux[4] man page for details.
+This sysctl controls the kernel's path translation mechanism; see man:linux[4] for details.
 Please note that changing it might cause trouble for Linux applications installed from FreeBSD packages; one reason is that many of those applications are still 32-bit, while Ubuntu seems to be deprecating 32-bit library support.
 
 [[linuxemu-advanced]]